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    My Limited Repertoire of Music

    http://soundcloud.com/joelb
    So occasionally I write songs and I'd appreciate a bit of critique on them! (The solo guitar clip isn't an original composition, however the rest are.)

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    Re: My Limited Repertoire of Music

    The top track is brilliant!

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    Re: My Limited Repertoire of Music

    Pretty good man, have to agree the top one was really good. Could listen to that for hours.
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    Re: My Limited Repertoire of Music

    Thanks fellas, however that's only a preview, whole things not nearly finished, yet. But again, thanks for the kind words.
    Edit: I just finished it. Rate, comment do whatever.
    http://soundcloud.com/joelb/finale

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    Re: My Limited Repertoire of Music

    Finale and Track 1 sound like they'd be pretty good songs if they had vocals. They're pretty short though, you'd have to lengthen them by 2 or 3 minutes. Which you could do easily by repeating the verse a few more times before the chorus, and adding another section with a different chord progression somewhere in the song. My favorite was "Music 1 2 comp", will you be recording these eventually?

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    Re: My Limited Repertoire of Music

    Quote Originally Posted by ērepgrigo
    Finale and Track 1 sound like they'd be pretty good songs if they had vocals. They're pretty short though, you'd have to lengthen them by 2 or 3 minutes. Which you could do easily by repeating the verse a few more times before the chorus, and adding another section with a different chord progression somewhere in the song. My favorite was "Music 1 2 comp", will you be recording these eventually?
    Yeah, but I can't sing at this stage, so I'm basically using guitars in place of singers. It'd be good to lengthen them, but I don't like repeating stuff too much because it can get really boring when you don't have vocals. Eventually I will record them, but it'll be a fair while down the track. Thanks.


 

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