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    lucien is queen Hazzystan's Avatar

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    UPDATE

    One of my first sigs in GIMP. CC would be appreciated.
    I'm not a fan of Naruto, I just thought that that stance would be good for the effect that I was using.


    I followed the advice I got, and came up with this.
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    what is homo love?

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    Re: Hi

    Rule 1: Don't blur the focal.

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    Re: Hi

    All things considered... I can see you have a natural understanding of composition and typography, even if your execution sucks balls lol. Don't worry, that'll come with time. Use colours that go well together, or at least make sense. Green, orange, yellow, purple, red = noisy. The lowercase H on your name doesn't look good. If you're implementing a name, use capitals, for either the first letter only or the entire thing. Never all lower-case. Just makes you look 5.

    Main things to take from that: don't blur the focal, as skype says. Only use colours that complement each other, and always try to have at least 3 colours going on (black and white tags are another story). This isn't a concrete rule obviously, art isn't science. Sometimes one colour will work, sometimes two, blah blah blah.
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    Re: Hi

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    [img]http://**********.com/img/1230088578.png[/img]
    what is homo love?

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    Re: UPDATE

    In the newest one,I dislike the color.The color just looks like a shitty-vomitey color.Also,the random squares are kind of weird.That is the only way I know how to describe it.I would like it better if those two black spaces weren't at the bottom and top of it.

    Courtesy?

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    Re: UPDATE

    Where is the focal point in your newest?... You need to define it.

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    Re: UPDATE

    Why was my post deleted????
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    Re: UPDATE

    In your newest one, what am I supposed to be looking at? A perfectly rectangular chunk of vomit colour sums it up lol. Advice: make sure you actually do something artistic. You're nowhere near established enough of an artist to make abstract art lovers believe squares of fuck-all mean anything :P
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