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    Um HALP


    Olol failure


    THE ORIGINAL FAILURE

    Help me please. I know nothing.
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    Re: Um HALP

    Sharpen and read tutorials.
    It's all you need.
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    Re: Um HALP

    Nice text efects. Thats all. Do something more in your tag. Courtesy REturned
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    Re: Um HALP

    Hard to read, too opaque, too much negative space.

    Ideas:

    - Sharpen
    - Get some glow
    - Provide a better background
    - Use some of that space
    - Remove that bulky cyan line
    - Make the lines less messy, have them horizontal only or vertical only.
    - Have the lines make a picture
    - Use your imagination.


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    Re: Um HALP

    I didn't find it failure, I thought it looked shmexy. :C
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    Re: Um HALP

    Quote Originally Posted by Johnneh
    Hard to read, too opaque, too much negative space.

    Ideas:

    - Sharpen
    - Get some glow
    - Provide a better background
    - Use some of that space
    - Remove that bulky cyan line
    - Make the lines less messy, have them horizontal only or vertical only.
    - Have the lines make a picture
    - Use your imagination.
    Thankyou very, VERY much =D
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