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    First In A While





    I used vanguard because thats the name I intend to change mine to.

    Idk.. what do you think?

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    Re: First In A While

    There's practically no focal.
    If there was, it would be the smudging, and those are the effects.

    You need to work on blending the render/focal, but only by a little bit. I know you want that sort of deep meaningful tag that only has his face showing and the rest obscured by effects, but that's hard stuff to do.

    Smudging shouldn't look like that either. At least, not unblended, anyway. Try adding some adjustment layers, brightness contrast, some black and white gradient maps on different modes, and make your effects clearer.

    At the moment it looks like a 3 year old child took a painting that had only just been finished and was still wet and smudged it with her hands. It doesn't look TOO bad, and it's good for your first tag done in a while, but don't pull that excuse.
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    Re: First In A While

    Your making it sound so.. hard >_>

    Should i give you the psd so you can help out..

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    Re: First In A While

    I'm giving you help. Criticism, they call it.

    Just, don't smudge so much. And try not to make a tag out of a smudged stock.
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    Re: First In A While

    Alright then..

    ill see what i can do


 

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