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    I think I have improved..
    No tutorials.. Nothing..
    Smudge:

    Original:

    Final

    Abstract


    Comments And Critique.

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    Re: /Thread

    Update.

    Somebody post..

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    That one was better than the final. I really like the smudging and colors, and also, why did you edit the layout from your original post? Liked that better, but oh well.
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    Thanks, I changed it back.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sniper

    That one was better than the final. I really like the smudging and colors, and also, why did you edit the layout from your original post? Liked that better, but oh well.
    I agree, this one is better than the final.

    And your smudging effect has a sort of painty/pastelly effect. Nice. :]

    Try using different intensities, brush sizes and other things next.
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    Thanks for the comments, What about the Abstract one, Should I smudge that together and make that flow or just leave it be?

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    I would say blend or something, you can't just have i connect, so have it bleed into each other.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Acer
    I would say blend or something, you can't just have i connect, so have it bleed into each other.
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