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    A manga drawing



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    It's average. I've never been a big fan of menga, but I have a menga cartooning book and it's actualy pretty simple. It looks good, but could be cleaner and the face is not good. Work on your eye shading and get rid of those cheek things. The other problem I see is the sholders. The slope weird and makes his neck look bad.

    Eidt: I agree with everything the man below me says. I'd also like to say that you shouldn't have to lines next to his croch. They look weird.

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    this has lots of faults. first, the eyes should be closer to eachother, and more even, there crooked. the neck should be thicker. and the anatomy is way off. the shoulders should be wider, and higher up, even for a younger character. the part by his knees are to thin, bulk them up just a bit. this drawing is good for a beginner, bu many flaws.

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    Thanks guys, I'll work on that. wink*)
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