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    Fanatic Enthusiast Vices's Avatar

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    4 new tags

    protocol failure


    Invasion


    uncharted


    Snowblind Provisional


    wesingsin



    followforth


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    Re: wearerapture

    The signatures are okay, but:

    1. The lightning stuff that's supposingly coming out of his hand seems out of place, compared to the rest of the sig.
    2. The lightning must be a very bright object, but I do not see any traces on it on the main character of the signature. It's like the lightning stuff isn't there, so work on that and make the light source reflect it's light on your character.
    3. Blur on the lower right hand seems out of place as well, did you try to show it's quickly moving? If so, then you should try a different blurring technique for it, right now it looks like a mess.
    4. Background is a bit dull and bland. The color is decent, though.

    Overall not bad, 7.3/10

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    Re: wearerapture

    Thanks!


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    Re: 4 new tags

    4 new tags uploaded


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    Re: 4 new tags

    In the invasion one the graphics in front don't look like the belong.
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    Re: 4 new tags

    Quote Originally Posted by Kush
    In the invasion one the graphics in front don't look like the belong.
    Yeah I thought the same, don't fit.
    but you're really good either way.

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