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    Moss' Beginners Animations! [UPDATED, 12/2]

    Here are some of my new Animations, i've been animating for about 2 months now, and i'm trying to make fighting Animations. Here are my first 2 with actual effects (Thanks Baha and Darkdemon) and sprites. Rate them please. Enjoy.

    EDIT: Gonna take out the embed's, they make the page laggy.

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    First Fight (Baha effects, Default Chars)
    http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...irst_fight.gif

    Then here's my gun test which evolved into the one below this. (Cape_man char from DD, desert eagle from http://www.droidz.org)
    http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...vc15/Gun_1.gif

    And 2nd Fight ( DD's Anime char, Gun Sprite from here)
    http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...15/Fight_2.gif

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    Updates: Easing Test
    http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...asing_test.gif

    ^How was that one, Since you guys had said I needed to use easing?

    Running Test
    http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...15/Running.gif

    (Thanks Cap'n For the nice Tut, Find it here)

    Short Gun Fight/Blood test
    http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...5/AxeFight.gif

    Quick kill, droidz weapon set. (When i get better at blood and hand to hand i'll add to this.)
    http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...ouble_kill.gif

    Flip test
    http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...5/Fliptest.gif

    Flipping + speed

    http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...lipperKill.gif

    Update 12/2: New flipping loop.

    http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b95/m ... ipping.gif


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    Baha effects my ass!

    Speaking of Baha, check out his tutorial. It will help you immensly. Work on the stick realism and movements.

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    Will do, thanks


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    wow those animations is better than i expected it, great effects but work on ur movements )

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    Dude, you suck almost as much as me!

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    Quote Originally Posted by dsavi.x4
    Dude, you suck almost as much as me!
    Hey man, don't talk like that. If you think he sucks, explain why.

    Like I said before, on your other thread, your animations are pretty good but you need to work on smoothness. Also, try and keep all your animations in one thread!

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    Quote Originally Posted by dsavi.x4
    Dude, you suck almost as much as me!
    Stfu, you suck worse I bet.

    The animations are very choppy between movements, and you don't use easing at all, that's like the main thing you need to learn now if you want to get better :]) , work on your effects, make them no just moving clumps of lines, the way you use them is bad, you leave them in the same pose for too long, so it looks retarded, move them around not spastically, but just move them a bit more, out of the original onion skin a bit, same you your electricity, but move that spastic like ,not stray to the other side of the screen spastic, but keep it in the same general direction, and near the original onion skin.
    Your blood needs a lot of help, use more particles for one, and not just one short fat red line, re-size each particle by 10 or 20 each frame and animate it falling to the floor, not like lead either, but like liquid, you've probably seen one of Doddsys animations, study some of his animations and see how he animates the blood, his is insane .
    Also your smoke, it didn't mutate any, it just was a grey blob on the end of the gun, didn't even move, smoke is like blood kind of, but rises.
    Move your sticks more, the arms, legs, head, feet, and spine, you tend to leave them in the same pose for way to long, and then just move them all at once in a huge leap from the original onion skin, that makes it look very choppy.
    Also you layer the sticks weirdly sometimes, in your first fight both of their heads were behind the line and then you put them both infront, try to layer them correctly the first time, so you don't have to go back and edit all the frames.
    Don't use the default to much either.
    [center:161o6f51]LET'S BREAK OUT THE SHOTGUNS WE'RE GOING TO TOWN![/center:161o6f51]
    [center:161o6f51][/center:161o6f51]

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    Quote Originally Posted by FryLock4
    Quote Originally Posted by dsavi.x4
    Dude, you suck almost as much as me!
    Stfu, you suck worse I bet.
    The animations are very choppy between movements, and you don't use easing at all, thats like blablabla.......
    (long post lol)
    anyways: your animation skills are...um.. aint good. baha's tut wil do you good, followed by a naimating. i suggest making effects test later, when your movements are better. hope i dont killed your animator spirit, but everyone has been a bad animator once, u do NOT wanna see my first!

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    Thanks but a little harsh, however i'd rather you guys be honest then to say it's good.


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    They're decent animations, just work on smoothness and physics. Hope you'll improve soon :]).


 
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