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    Db4D animation thread NEW!!! (FREE BEER)

    Ive been animating for a couple months over at SD, decided to try it out over here...

    NEWEST ANI!

    THE HIGHDIVE


    lengthly animation
    Jonny D: Day 1
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=517-_dtiytM

    short anis
    Sliding is for fun
    http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/999/slidingji7.gif

    they are not the greatest but hey, im tryin...

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    dang both way nice with a little work they both could be inter good job

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    You definately have the potential for inters there. Your anis looked very nice. The only thing I would suggest is to spend more time on them. Some parts of the Jonny D were really good, but others werent. If you spent more time on the bad parts, you would have a really nice ani. Keep working.

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    He's good, need to work on SOme Fighting hand-to-hand and shooting. Try to make your moves inter lock, like in a real fight, that green guiy would of taken Johnny out After the first kick cause He set his foot down to slow. : )
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    I think you need to work on your movements, there smooth, but your walking was bad because they kicked there legs up too much, if you looked at some tuts, and studied them, you would improve alot, and you animes would look much better.

    Try making some tests on effects or guns or somthing for practice, before making a large anime

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    thanks

    Alrite thanks alot guys.
    yea i will definatly hit up some tuts around here and tighten things up in my anis...

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    I agree, ur walking isnt that great but other wise its pretty good, the only thing i didnt like was the jumping, but thats prolly because my animations have high jumps becuz i think they look kool. But anywayz great job.

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    O yeah and if u could post "Jonny D" on imageshack or something, i would like to see it wen its smoother looking. if u will?

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    Comment on my new ani please )

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    it was great )
    but t when he felt down from that jumping thingy at the swimming hall.......what is it called????...whatever when he reached the ground he should get more hurt like some blood.....but if ya dont know how blood is done its ok-....
    really good i see you will make it far in DD
    ) keep it up
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    Those are pretty damn good. I enjoy a sense of humour in animating: I try to employ it myself in some areas. There are a few walking tuts out there that I'm sure, as the others agree, will help with your walking motions.

    Overall, my ratings;

    Smoothness: 8.6
    Style: 8.8
    imagination: 7.7

    Overall: 8.3

    =Definitely Inter work. I can't honestly state anything, but I'm sure you'll advance soon.

    edit: as Tomsen stated, I also expected some more blood upon floor-to-face crunch time xP. There are blood tuts too, check 'em out.
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