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  1. #1
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    Animations by Slaybells : updated 3-12

    Hey guys, I'm new to pivot and have found it to be lots of fun so far!

    Here are my animations:

    Katana Guy
    ^ my first attempt, It's really bad I know, but I wanted to play with a sword.

    Wu stairs
    ^ Playing with stairs.

    Ninja Fight
    ^ My first actual 'Fight'. This is my best so far and isn't done, I'm probably going to keep adding to it as I learn how to do stuff.

    My icon
    ^ I like making these silly little icons/ pointless things. Here's a guy running around in a box!

    Robo fight WIP
    ^ Work in progress, obviously. I think the initial hit might be a bit weak, but I think I did the falling guy decently.


    Comments please! And thanks!

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    Hmm, not bad. But in the Kitana man one, the flip that the guy doesn't should stay in the same place in the air. Try fixing that problem.

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    there were good but the only problem is ninja guy one is kind of choppy.
    <--- naruto says,"Let me out of this box.

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    Wow you ninja fight is really good just keep working at it and oninskin is the grey mark from your stks last postion
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    all of them were reall choppy work on easing. the one that wasent very choppy was the ninja fight it was amazing good job keep it up.
    credz to animal and pistolman for my use bars!



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    Very good for a noob. Just too choppy, but you've got the basic motions down.

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    I've got a couple updates up top. Thanks for the comments! I'm trying to work on easing and using effects like ground shaking, etc.

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    The robot fight one is good, just a little choppy. Increase the fps by about 1. You have all the movements and effects down, you just need to work with choppiness.

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    These are really good but for the robot one to make the punch look stronger you might want to increase the tremor from the hit or the guy's reaction itself.

    Nice job.

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    Pretty good and smoth inter in 1.5 months. Keep it up!
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