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    1st Animation

    First animation that was decent( by my standards)

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    That was pretty smooth but need to bend back more and when he jumps bend the bottom leg. Besides that it is good.
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    The main thing is that you really need to move more than one joint at a time. This anim just looks silly and really unrealistic, especially when they both just fly away at the end.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Slaybells
    The main thing is that you really need to move more than one joint at a time. This anim just looks silly and really unrealistic, especially when they both just fly away at the end.
    Slaybells said it all. And from now on, save your .gifs with a frame delay of 6, shrink frames by 2 and uncheck merge. Nothing more nooby-looking than a giant animation with just 2 stickmen in it. You'll need a whole lot of practice to sort out those movements. Go look at some tutorials, and see how other better animators do their stuff to see what yours should look like.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Slaybells
    The main thing is that you really need to move more than one joint at a time. This anim just looks silly and really unrealistic, especially when they both just fly away at the end.
    Still tu true. Just practice and youll get better.
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    Yeah, make it a lot more smoother and "realisicalize" the movements. Otherwise it's not bad for a first animation.

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    ugh. horrible. sorry

    you need a lot of work

    i never thought id say this but make some tests! like walking, or just movement in general!
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    well...............lolz you need a floor for one. when the guy jump the first time he jsut floats and when the 2nd guy comes in he just slides in. atleast try at walking unless you want you stickmen to slide around in anims
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    first of all narutofan what are you talking about his animation was horribal! no ofense he has potecial yes but he has alot more stuff to work on so im sorry. ok you need to work on smoothness it was aemi smooth but just focusse on making them move using basic movements. for example WALKING. the y just slid across the screen.
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