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    Woodmaisters Animations! (new ani 15/04/07)

    Welcome to WOODMAISTERS ANIMATIONS

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    Newest ani!

    A guy playing football breaks a window and gets in a fight!


    Older animations go towards the bottom!

    Beginner Animations!

    Football fight
    Lol combo
    Dont Steal! (My first one)

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    Hey, that isn't bad for one of your firsts. Good animation indeed, none very choppy, try and work on smoothness a little bit, theres some around the tutorial section. and maybe a bit of work on making the movements look realistic, but that just basically takes time and practise. For example, the main guy didn't move his arms at all when he was walking. and stuff like that.
    Keep it up man! =)
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    Yeah, I agree with Iceguy. Nice for a first, the speed is good, but it's pretty stiff and unrealistic looking, check out some tutorial's.

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    Thanks guys!

    O btw, the reason the main guy didn't moves his arms at the start was because his hands was in his pockets )

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    I liked it, but it was a bit choppy, keep trying and I'm sure you'll reach high beginner soon!
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    Did he erm.. climb through a wall?

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    i mean, who doesnt climb through walls, i do it every day. Like they said, bit choppy and stiff, check the tuts, pretty useful

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    Great job. One of the best I've seen for beginners who just came. Way better than mine. :P

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    Hey that's very nice for a firsts. I've seen lots worse then you that have made quite a few.
    Your running looks like Baha's style from his tut. I'm guessing that you've read his tut. If you have then it really does show they are really good.

    But there were still some problems.
    When the guy lands from his fall he looks stiff, probably because he should have absorbed the fall more in his legs. And scrunched up a little more.
    And there are some places that movements seem to suddenly change direction.

    Basically you just need more practice.
    But if that was really your first then it is one of the best firsts that I've ever seen.
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    ))(* thanks alot guys. I shouldve explained that the part where he climbed through a wall was where he kicked the other guy through a window. Thanks for the comments though, and yeah, i did read his tutorials, i just know quite a bit about physics.


 
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