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    Commets on my run?

    HI, all im new and did a couple animations on my own then noticed the looked funny. So i went to the internet and found this site. My first experience with DarkDemon.org was Bahamutís Ultimate Pivot Tutorial... If any of you have looked at it then you know its sweeeeet. So i really started to go through the website and now i want some feed back on my animations. This is a test for running. I used a regular ran and a ninja run, Fayon post a ninja run which i liked so tryed. So what do you think? If i do anything wrong please tell me i just started like two weeks ago thanks all.

    http://<a href="http://img295.images...&#91;/img]</a>

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    Welcome to darkdemon.org and everyone knows Baha's tut, it is the best ever =p

    The running is good but I'd work on the reaction to the wall... It's really choppy and stiff.

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    Welcome to DarkDemon, Black Dragon! Remember to read the rules, the main rules can be found in the Entrance Hall. Remember, don't spam, mini-mod, double post, ect, or everyone will fly up your ass within seconds!

    Anywho, you're running is ok. Just need to work on your reactions, such as when he hits the wall. His upper body should've snapped backwards, and the legs following with it. Just keep practicing, maybe look at a few more tutorials for other various things.

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    Thank you

    Thanks to everyone who looked and commeted. Yeah i didnt put much into the wall just was really focusing on the run. I wanted to keep him running.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ninguem
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    wtf?


    The animation had a good loop point, The running needs some work, and the falling down etc needs work.

    Try not to use the default stick, its sucks when it comes to movement.

    Keep practicing, look at some smoothness tuts etc.
    my animations COURTESAH?






    chuck norris doesnt sleep, he waits


 

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