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  1. #1
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    Bopro's Animations - Heavy Spacing Test #2- 17th May

    Hullo! Welcome to my thread. I'll post my Pivot animations here. If you do not post, you will be shot. Muahahahaha. Muahaha. Muaha.


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    Heavy Spacing number 2. Doesn't look very... heavy though. Oh well. Was fun to make.

    http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/4...ingtestds7.gif
    Heavy Spacing test #1


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    http://img214.imageshack.us/my.php?image=effortcf3.gif Woot, first fight in a long, long time! Nice in my opinion, check it out..

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    (these are from when I was OzOne)

    http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/4...thfight5jy.gif

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    http://img145.imageshack.us/my.php?i...estrealut2.gifA short walking test. Sucks. Lots.

    http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/6189/runstyleus7.gifCartoon Runnah!
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    umm

    i think oyu need to work alot on running and walking, maybe look at a tutorial
    your walkingh looked fine, until i saw how stiff your arms were, and the fall, ,, i dunno why you added that, also his head went threw the floor

    in your running,
    it was just stiff like, and kinda choppy,
    he also moved up to much in the air by the looks of it,

    so go to the tutorail section, and maybe check out bahas master tutorial, or the master list of tutorails

    welcome to darkdemon., hope you improve greatly,

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    You definently need to work on running and walking may i suggest tutorials...but overall they're pretty good
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    work on the walking and running like others have said, use this link to bahas ultimate tutorial it covers the basis of running walking and alot more
    http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?t=10350
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    Thanks for the tips people, and enjoy your pie.

    After reading your posts, I went and looked at bahas tuts, and got a few good tips from them, and then went and looked at Capn's cartoon running, and modified it a tiny bit to get a nice style. The style, is in fact, one about a million other animators have come up with. Oh well.

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    Good , Wery good n.n

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    Wow! That looks very smooth and stylish running!
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    Ok couple of problems here: 1) Some movements ie. when he fell in the walking test he fell way to slow 2) in the running his arms looked like they went into the middle then out again not like they crossed over. This can be fixed by having one arm more straight then the other 3) AHHHHHHHH!!!!!! In all but one of your anims the back was incredibley stiff!!! Move it more!! But the rest of the stickman was pretty well animated. Lolz.
    But other than that they were pretty good. I wont comment on physics there isnt much in them apart from one and you cant be expected to be really good in that when you are a beginner lol.

    Wow this must be my longest reply to someones thread ever you should be honoured lolz =P

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    Thanks for the replies, and I'll try to work on my stiffness (Specially for you guys... rofl!)

    I didn't read those before I made this, so it'll probably have the same problems as before, but it looked pretty good to me.

    http://img214.imageshack.us/my.php?image=effortcf3.gif

    Also, sorry I didn't courtesy you guys. I never saw the replies.
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    Your new running ani is very nice. Shexshy.

    Your new fight ani was iffy. When he threw the first the punches, the guy getting hit reacted strange. He got hit, reacted, stayed where he was, got hit again etc...

    And when he kicked the second guy in the face, it was quite stiff.
    Work on stiffness and your physics.

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