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    New Animation. Doged It!


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    wow

    wow i see a lot of potential but the problem is choppyness and some easing i would go to tutorials and fix it out
    Check out my thread.



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    Wow, thats pretty good. Some choppy ness, high beginner almost.
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    hmmm, nice anim, very stylish idea and i thinks its original. Its very good, but it would look better if you eased it more, and the stiffness, move all the joints in every frame unless ur double framing ( dont focus on this only movement ) k? med- high begginer.

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    stiffness....work on stiffness
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    Quote Originally Posted by Le Shorte
    stiffness....work on stiffness
    thats probably the worst comment i ever heard. Try to be positive he had good ideas and yes it was stiff but it was a little eased and a little smooth and thats very good for begginers Its comments like your that make begginers like him quit pivot quicker. Read the how to comment sticky before you post a comment on an animation godamit !!!!

    Dont listen to this guy dont take people very serioulsly unless there high begginers k ?
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    Great idea, never seen it before.

    Work on: Easing, physics, and stiffness.
    Stiffness? Yup. Move every red dot every frame, even if it's only one pixel.
    Physics? Yup. Your jumps don't look powerful enough. Also, that split looks quite hard to get up from the way you did it.
    Easing? Yup. You move very slowly in the first frame, a little faster the next, a little faster the next, etc. , etc... Once you've reached top speed, slow down again. You want it visualized?
    Okay : |-|--|----|--------|----|--|-|.
    - is how much you move, and | means next frame.

    Med beginner, possibly med-high.

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    wow thax everyone thos are some good tips! and thx for the positive crtisizum!

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    you need to work on physics but the easing was pretty good but it could be less stiff id say med begginer watch some tutorials and keep animating! courtsey?

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    i think you need to work on physics, easing and a bit of stiffness, keep animating XD so congrats
    courtesy?? http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?t=29496
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