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  1. #1
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    My First AnimatioN!!!!

    http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=2624 plz tell me what u think

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    im srry but thats 1 of the most crapped up animations ever.
    Its: Super unrealistic, the knive moved in the air and it was to major slow, super choppy, super un-eased, super stiff. and u dindt use alsmost any movemements at all.

    Work on : Blood, Easing, Smoothness, movements, physics, reactions and the laws of nature lol.

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    laserman is right. and please, use pivot 2 guess i don't like sprites
    I never really was on your side...

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    DUDE i SAID IT WAS MY FRIST ANIMATION

  5. #5
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    we know. and we are telling you what you did wrong and how to fix them.

    now. work on easing, use actual sticks etc. instead of sprites. try and make your own sticks. if not give creds. go to baha's tut. helped me a lot. in the tutorial list. the flash tutorials(piv tuts done in flash) are very helpful.

    your getting used to pivot. the first time i used pivot i sucked too ^.^ made a 500 frame animation of a fight in like, 10 minutes. pivot takes time and patience. just keep your cool and take the criticism and LEARN from it.


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    Yea, this isnt too good, but at least u know .. the concept of blood? Anyways, it was original, but the above posts are right... make an ani with a stick instead of a sprite..p.s. you can get them at droidz.org, and make a new one so everyone can see that you've got potential...

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    ce job dude.GREAT for ur first.This is what you need to do.Move all the joints of everything in every frame so it will look better.Go to pivot tutorials and look at bahas.Study his running, then walking, then punching, then kicking and try to copy excactly what it is.One by one.After you master it then put it all in a animation.and in knowtime.You will rich mid-high begginer or even intern.


    EDIT: Don't let the cridsim get to you.It helps you but don't stress over it.Thier not trying to be mean but thier trying to make you better.If the say you are bad at physics.Go to http://www.youtube.com or press search at darkdemon and type in Physics tutporial's and study it.Good luck and try doing what I said.
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    I didnt understand a thing in that. Just because its your first doesnt mean you can torture of with crap *jokes -_-*. But anyways keep practicing you'll get better. Listen to the pros(not me).


 

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