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  1. #1
    Fresh Newbie
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    Bethrezen "Monkey fghting style" garage

    Hi everybody! I'm really new on this forum (i registered 3 minutes ago and I want to show my stuff that I've done about 2 months ago. Come see them. Ladies and gentlemen! Here they are!

    First animation called "Wu Attack!" (it's from Pivot War with my friend) :
    http://www.vpx.pl/up/20071223/44786f487 ... 191505.gif
    http://chomikuj.pl/Bethrezen/Sticki/War+Wilus.piv


    Second animation called "Sariel the Hero" :
    http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/7910 ... ghtyc1.gif
    http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/Beth ... erzbea.piv


    Third animation called "Monkey Fighting Style Show" :
    http://www.vpx.pl/grafika,49018.html
    http://www.chomikuj.pl/Bethrezen/Sticki ... 4*99ki.piv


    Fourth animation called "Skateboard Killah" :
    http://pivothost.org/upload/v2/Bethreze ... ardxh1.gif
    http://chomikuj.pl/Bethrezen/Sticki/Ska ... lo1996.piv


    Fifth animation called "Zombie Day part 1" :
    http://www.vpx.pl/grafika,55532.html
    http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/Beth ... my4ysv.piv

    Sixth animation called "Base Rampage" :
    http://www.vpx.pl/grafika,63003.html
    http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/Beth ... ylea9y.piv


    And I rather like to watch animations on .piv, 'cuz on .gif it's so slow.
    And I'd like you vote from 1 to 10. And please tell me what's wrong in my stuff.
    Laz0r Town! FTW!

  2. #2
    Veteran Enthusiast LeadingManNigel's Avatar


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    Your animations are quite good actually, you need to work on stuff like FLuidness, movements(your movements are good but still need work), preety much the basics. However your anims are entertaining and enjoyable. Keep up the work.<3 Xinq

  3. #3
    Junior Member
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    in a place with squirrels, bunnies, unicorns, and this nasty water that u have to chew.
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    your animations are quite choppy and stiff. I say stay here for awhile. However, that drill effect in ur second ani was very well done.
    Courtesy?

  4. #4
    Senior Member
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    Dec 2007
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    good anims u know how to do effects i can see that but still a bit stiff with the movements of ur stk.
    just keep doin the basics like tests for walking jumping and repeat those till it moves smooth enough.
    check out baha's tutorial that should help to just by reading how he does things.
    keep it up!
    great anims
    Courtesy?

  5. #5
    Fresh Newbie
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    Wow! I didn't suppose that I'll get that kind of opinion! I'm suprised!
    Laz0r Town! FTW!

  6. #6
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    Good work on easing and
    fluidicity other then that good.

    (sig by Chaotic Kid)

  7. #7
    Enthusiast SmashFiles's Avatar

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    It was okay, work on choppyness and smoothness, work at it some and i think youll get there.
    Courtsey?
    D?
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  8. #8
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    Hi again! I added my new animation! Come see it in forst post!
    Laz0r Town! FTW!


 

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