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  • Med Beginner

    1 16.67%
  • High Beginner

    3 50.00%
  • Low Intermediate

    2 33.33%
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  1. #1
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    New animation and new signature sticks, will give courtesy.

    I just wanted to get some criticism and advice.
    Here is my animation showing my signature sticks.

    http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9646 ... manfd6.gif

    So please criticise to no end but give advice.
    I was thinking of sending this in for inter.
    So rank it PLEASE.

    UPDATE

    This was just a running jump sequence I quickly made.
    http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/2334/38part2sq7.gif

    Please rate.

    New UPDATE

    This was an animation featuring Berts Dark Bert stk.
    Creds to Bert for the stick. Thanks man.

    http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/1492 ... ingpk8.gif

    Please rate and comment.

  2. #2
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    Re: New animation and new signature sticks, will give courte

    I say Med-High. Cool ideas, You need work on maybe a bit more easing. Some of the effects worked nicely other not so good. Good nontheless though, Good job. Keep it up :3

  3. #3
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    Maybe could you be a bit more specific on actions I didnt get right.

  4. #4
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    Right at the start.. When he jumpped. The city went though the floor, Also the tail moves weird sometimes, Looked a little un-eased when the dud crashed into the wall and made teh hole.

  5. #5
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    Ok thanks for the comments I will work on that ;D

  6. #6
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    I like it. I'd say medium beginner. But when he was kicked and flew through the air, his body didn't flop around, it was stiff.

    Work on that and you'll be on your way to Intermediate zone.

    Credits to Bandito for the awesome sig!
    http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?t=35242
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  7. #7
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    its not the flopping that gets you inters its the easing , and movements
    I return courtesy!
    viewtopic.php?f=2&t=38996

  8. #8
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    Well. Not choppy IMO. Nice and smooth. Easing was good, just work on better effects and movements, and you'll be inter in no time.

    High beginner.
    courtesy?

  9. #9
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    med-high beginner
    bit stiff and choppy you need to ease things a bit more. move every joint each frame
    keep it up !
    doin good
    Courtesy?


 

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