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  1. #1
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    My prisoner episode 1 pivot, view here (link to youtube)

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dw4ANmh66PA

    Watch it than rate and comment and stuff like that
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    bump
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    well bit of a weird storyline could be me though
    anyways improve on stiffness and easing and such watch a few tutorials that can help you improve.
    Make the movements of ur stick in more frames and watch the onion skin dont go to far from it unless ur dong like heavy spacing.
    keep it up!!

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    Well, first off, don't bump or post animations on youtube. (unless you're inter+, or course )

    But on the actual animation, it was stiff, and lacked a lot of easing. You're about low med beginner, and it was good to see that you tried to make a long animation. The blure effect near the beginning looked pretty cool, so hats off to you for that.

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    Sorry, about the youtube thing, but thanks for the info, i can work on that on episode 2
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    That was a little choppy and not verry smooth, but i love the story line, it looks to be a good series.


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    Low beginner, stiff and choppy. I like the storyline though. Work on easing, physics, movements, and posting in GIF format.

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    I liked the storyline. Very original. Although, you need to work on the basics. For now yuo are a low med begginer because you get how to do movements, you just need to make them smoother and ease them more. Theres my evaluation.

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    its stiff and choppy,its a good storyline,

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    Re: My prisoner episode 1 pivot, view here (link to youtube)

    Thanks, but what part do I really need work on? This would help alot
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