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  1. #1
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    Olafur333's Thread that will be updated, eh?

    K, I'm back :|

    I care what rank I'm in, But It won't change how good my animations are so it doesn't matter to me. But please, I beg of you, higher level dudes, give me critical criticism. I want to know what I'm doing wrong.

    Open in pivot version 2 for normal version. Because, Yeah.. Because I used pivot 2.

    1. - http://uploaded.pivothost.org/Olafur333 ... tsxjar.piv -

    2. - http://uploaded.pivothost.org/Olafur333/Fightcvui.piv - SPEED IT UP BY 3 (If in pivot 2, otherwise, I dunno)

    3. - http://uploaded.pivothost.org/Olafur333/Jumpze7l2.piv -

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    Regular Member Xile's Avatar
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    Re: Olafur333's Thread that will be updated, eh?

    Hmm...
    You seem High Beginner-ish

    Gun/Camera Effects
    Your shaky for the Gun test and Camera Movements.
    You need to practise on Running.

    Pwn'd hit
    Good easing when He got hit in the Air.
    But a bad fall, cross over his arms to make him look like a Normal person.
    He looked a bit like a Spaz when Running with his Arms wide open.

    Sword Jump
    Seems Ok for your Level. Lil slow when taking out the sword though.
    Try and put more Effects in.

    You didnt Really deserve this Post. You didn't give a good comment on mine, as I gave a very good CC Post on yours.
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  3. #3
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    Re: Olafur333's Thread that will be updated, eh?

    Hmmm... that looked as high beg, you need to work on the landing though


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    Re: Olafur333's Thread that will be updated, eh?

    OMG; Nice. Annar íslendingur, En Já, fólk segjir að ég sé íslenskur

    Thanks, High Beginner, Yay.

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    Re: Olafur333's Thread that will be updated, eh?

    Hmm... yes, high beginner-ish, you seem to have potential, nice animations, with originality. My favourite is the sword jump one, that's tasty : D
    There is some stiffness, you can easily overcome that. Look at the masterlist, especially trailing movements.
    These animations are quite good, I like them, entertaining, just a bit choppy and stiff.
    Keep it up man, I see a young spark in you ;D

    Courtesy returned.

    Oh, and btw, please dear god, save as a gif.


 

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