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Thread: Syrup

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    Syrup

    this is my first animation. i can use lots of tips...and i know is suck so peace
    http://img457.imageshack.us/my.php?i...imation8zk.gif

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    not bad! If I were you i would work on making it smoother and id Make him pull the gun out or something instead of ot just appearing(plus get a more realistic grip on the gun). but otherwise, it was pretty good for your first anim. youl get better with practace!
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    id recomend shrinking the frames 1/2 it makes it look a lot smoother

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    wow thats really good for a first! im very impresed )

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    awesome for a first, i reccomend the tuts section though, it helps us all lol, and welcome to the site. i have a bit of advice: you are imaginative when you get good dont let your imagination leave. i let it leave and now i have no original ideas lol, but yeah you have potential good job!

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    this is my new animation i tried to do what you guys told me, i need tips on this also :_)
    http://img469.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fizight2ik.gif

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    it was ok but half way through the men went behind the stick on the floor

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    prettttty good my friend!
    work on the body movements

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    The blood just sprang out and the movements were a little choppy. but its okay.

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    work on smoothness and movements most of all. Why does he go behind the line in one part of the animation.


 
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