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  1. #1
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    Choc'N'Chips' Animations - Sword play testing

    Hey there. I'm actually a newcomer to DarkDemon, and have not attempted to animate in over a year. At that time, I was a med-beginner and I'm not sure whether or not I have improved. But I thank you for coming into the thread and hope you take a glance at a few of my ani's. Comments are appreciated =-D

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    Some tests I was doing. Creds to CHA-POW for the trails and club, and my thanks for making his sword-fighting tutorial.

    http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/5567 ... ghtlr7.gif

    Well, I was planning an epic fight. I don't know, it turned out to be not so epic. I'm not sure if I'm going to finish it.

    http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/3842 ... lipir9.gif

    Not much to comment on in this one. Gif raped colors.


    http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/788/ ... allqg8.gif

    Biiiiggg bump. Sorry. This animation, probably some of my best running movements. Mostly a test, and I know that the fall was H-O-R-R-I-B-L-E.




    http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/5025/d ... ackty5.gif

    A short warm-up I did.

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    http://uploaded.pivothost.org/AzJgard/M ... ht6w8p.gif

    I was concentrating on more of the double-kick than the rest.

    http://uploaded.pivothost.org/AzJgard/C ... chb51p.gif
    I'm not very proud of this one. Rather dumb, choppy and ease-lacking >.<

    Oold

    A fight (I know, a very detailed description)

    Credits

    Droidz
    FrozenFire
    CHA-POW

    (Sowee, I can't remember who made the face pack D= )

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    Re: Choc'N'Chips' Animations - Take a look

    its good and there was easing i can see that but you still need to work on it.
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    Re: Choc'N'Chips' Animations - Take a look

    Thank you for the comment. It was a little bit shaky, that I know.

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    Re: Choc'N'Chips' Animations - Take a look

    Welcome to DarkDemon. I see potential in your work, and pretty sweet move. Med Beginner though, becuase you need to work on physics and easing. Good otherwise though.

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    Re: Choc'N'Chips' Animations - Take a look

    Of course. Thank you for the welcome, comment and constructive criticism.

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    Re: Choc'N'Chips' Animations - Take a look

    Welcome to DD. I would say med begginer. That animation could be high begginer though if it wasnt as stiff and has a little better spacing. Other than that good job, it was pretty creative.

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    Re: Choc'N'Chips' Animations - Take a look

    Okay, I will make a chart:
    Stiffness: Needs work-32% more work and you are fine
    Choppyness: Perfect, you are really smooth
    Jerkiness: Need a lil work, but not a lot.



    So what I am saying is that you need to work on stiffness a lil and just make joints move in one direction, rather than like go left one frame, then right the next.
    Med Beginner-------[you]---High Beginner
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    Re: Choc'N'Chips' Animations - Take a look

    ^ howz that a chart? LOL.

    I say high-medium beginner. Your movements are good, but they lack easing and your physics are slightly off. But that move was very awesome. So keep animation, and welcome to Dark Demon.

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    Re: Choc'N'Chips' Animations - Take a look

    Thank you all very much for the comments. I will try to give courtesy to everyone, and I hope to update this thread with a new ani soon. Ty ^.^

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    Re: Choc'N'Chips' Animations - Take a look

    pretty nice... it was ALMOST high beg... but bad movements and jerkyness made it bad...

    overal its med beg.. but close XD i liked figures too...

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