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    Hey Im new. This is my first ani on here - sean13

    Hi im new. I have added a file which is my first animation to be put on here. its plain and simple. i dont want to experiment to much. just kept it simple.
    Its called BrickwallRun.
    Plz comment and tell me how i could improve.

    Also, could some one tell me how to gget up in ranks around here plz.

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    Re: Hey Im new. This is my first ani on here - sean13

    Bahas ULTIMATE tutorial. 56K warning (CLICK ON THE THING) !


    For your animations :
    •Stiff
    •Choppy
    •No easing
    -----CALCULATING RESULTS-----
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    Low begginer.

    Also , you might find this intresting : Movement Spacing in Pivot (By Lf2master ) (CLICK ON THE THING).
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    Re: Hey Im new. This is my first ani on here - sean13

    Yep its stiff, and in desprate need of easing!
    you really need to look at the tuts
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    Re: Hey Im new. This is my first ani on here - sean13

    quite stiff and choppy


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    Re: Hey Im new. This is my first ani on here - sean13

    less low beginner-tssss,you lame
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    Re: Hey Im new. This is my first ani on here - sean13

    needs more easing watch some tuts its really helps
    but pretty good for you first ^^.
    Visit my animations click here under

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    Re: Hey Im new. This is my first ani on here - sean13

    ok hi and welcome to DarkDemon .
    For ur first good job. You might wanna fix some things like....

    -Choppiness

    -Stiffness

    -Speed

    as you get better your ranking goes higher.

    Just follow darkdemon.org`s tutorials and you`ll be great in no time.
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    Re: Hey Im new. This is my first ani on here - sean13

    As everyone said Stiff and un eased, but..! i will explain! The run is ok for a first but, it isn't eased. Meaning that each space is the same not slow quicker quicker quick slower slow... or |-|--|---|----|---|--|-| like that, if still not getting it check a tutorial on it.
    Stiffness, With it, each frame like 3 joints are moved making it look stiff. To eliminate it, try to make each joint move in each frame. Takes awile to get but you should get it in time. When he hits the ground its good to see that you make his hands hit and bounce, but they stop straight away. Using easing like process... Or thats how i think of it you make them hit and bounce up and then hit again and bounce less and less untill just 1 pixel then nothing!

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    Re: Hey Im new. This is my first ani on here - sean13

    That animation was good but everyones right it's stiff, choppy and uneased. But of course it doesnt really matter cuz your beginner and you have loottssss of time to fix em up. The run on the animaion was good but the whole upper body of the stick was stiff and needs to be eased more. and when the stck hits the wall you could of added a tremour effect( a tremour effect is when the ground shakes up and down sorta like a mini earthquake kinda thing...its a nice effect). And when the stick falls down after running into the wall it should of been eased and you should of moved his arms and legs more to make it look less stiff. Anyway good for a start, low beginner. Keep it up

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