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    Hard Punch

    Im new to the whole animation thing. tell me what you think of this punch, and what i can do to improve it. Also i would like to know what i would have to improve on so im not a low beginner anymore.


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    Re: Hard Punch

    Well I liked it, since i'm also a beginner I can't put my finger on anything special.
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    Re: Hard Punch

    Well there is one big problem.
    It was reaaally shaky,
    if you move all the joints, you should also
    move them in one direction, and not just a random direction.
    If you know what i mean.
    That was mostly everything,

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    Re: Hard Punch

    I think the punch where kind a wierd but realistic at the same time

    but that smoke effect looked pretty bad and a bit choppy at the start and end
    whitout those things it was pretty cool

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    Re: Hard Punch

    yea, i tried making the smoke from scratch. i decided to take that smoke and impact out. ill try that again later lol after some tuts. thanks for the tips so far. What else is wrong with my punch?

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    Re: Hard Punch

    That was pretty good. Could use more smoothing. Nice use of a black backround


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    Re: Hard Punch

    Needs some easing, and also some gravity, as the guy would never stay at the same height in the air. He would go down slowly. But you are good for a new guy, I would say low-med beginner.

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    Re: Hard Punch

    it's good, but horrible spacing, and shakey
    try to keep the feet stationary, and the body sways
    ok job though, med begginer
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    Re: Hard Punch

    low gravity! Kind Of Cool toh!


 

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