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  1. #1
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    My first animation

    can u guyz please tell me if my animation is ok and what i can improve on it

  2. #2
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    Re: My first animation

    Hmm...try speeding it up a little bit. Plus, no offense, but a bullet doesn't do that (come back down straight and zip through your body :P)
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  3. #3
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    Re: My first animation

    i know but if you wait long enough a bullet really would come down near you if you did that (mythbusters did it)but i have an improved one right here

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    Re: My first animation

    Quote Originally Posted by weinstein10
    i know but if you wait long enough a bullet really would come down near you if you did that (mythbusters did it)but i have an improved one right here
    The newer anim's not much better...

    Problems:
    -The guy doesn't looked like he tossed the gun but the gun went really far.
    -A bullet doesn't bounce like that... or can it?... >_> <_< >_> <_< '_'<(I dunno)
    -The blood was in a pile but when there's no ground (Basically means a line in the animation that acts like the ground... Did you catch that?) people usually see it as a "flat" ground instead of a "perspective" ground. If you didn't understand that, then someone who understood it please clarify...

    So basically work on:
    Choppiness - Smoothness
    Stiffness - Easeness or whatever you call it
    Bad Physic - Good Physics

    Tip: Read Baha's tut.



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