My 1st pivot animation-- Please watch

[Cyber Tyrant]

This is my first animation I've ever made...
Goku vs Vegeta
Please rate and make suggestions. Thanks
Updated: Added poll (just wanted to try it out seeing as this is my first post)

[Alcyone]

*this goes in the beginner section

[Nev]

*this goes in the beginner section

Moved to beginners hall 2.

[Furon]

hi.
nice effects.
no easing seen.
very stiff.

find the tutorial master list and use tutorials.

oh nearly forgot , try and stay off the dragonballs z animations .

chow :P
courtesy

[Jordan]

Cyber tyrant, i think you are low begginer.


This is only your first pivot, but that doesn't mean people will just take it easy on you.

You need to improve on:

- Easing: There was no easing in this whatsoever. You need to learn more about easing and what it looks like. For a tutorial on easing click here.
- Stiffness: The animation on the whole was quite stiff and not very smooth. You have to make it smooth to make it look half-decent. For a tutorial on smoothness click here.

Good things:

The good thing about your animation is your effects, which was the best bit of your animation and was going on alot in it. I suggest you make your own effects and sticks, but if you did, good for you.

Overall, i think you have potential, keep it up!

Ps- Go to darren's ultimate tutorial to get some other tips and tricks which will help you alot.