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  1. #1
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    evilbunny's 2nd and 3rd and 4th animations

    Plz rate ( you might have to double click on the pictures... )
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    wimpy kick (stiff at end soz)

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    Re: evilbunny's 2nd and 3rd and 4th animations

    ok here is my third and fourth you may have to double click on the picture
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    wimpy kick (stiff at end soz)

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    Re: evilbunny's 1st 2nd and 3rd animations

    Your anim's are stiff and a little smooth but their also slow and choppy your animations are above first timer animations but they simply need to flow aswell. Here are some examples your choppy problem :

    What you should for easing to make it smooth:

    In this case the stickfigure increases his movement speed slowly then faster faster and then reverse it so it looks smooth. Take this as an example the . is how much you move the stickfigure and the | repersents the frame.E.X: |.| .| .| .| .| .|.|
    here is the .piv so you may understand better. [.piv]

    Now i will comment on my personal feelings about this animation and your rank.
    The stickfigures kick is so stiff because he doesn't even move his back or anything hes just keeps going onmoving forward without changing posittion except when hes reaching through his legs which is a little unrealistic (btw i admiore you trying the 3D effect.) The when the attacking stickfigure fires his blast the other stickfigure lays on the floor calm without moving a single muscle. It would help if when he got it there was more of an effect even a tremour effect. Last two things when the stick backed away he walked backwards really stiff too. You need to ifx that. I think your low beginner sorry maybe you'll be med soon with some more practis stick to basicm movements and baha's tutorial click HERE for the link.Keep it up dude sorry for being a little harsh if you think i was being so.Hop it helped!!!


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    Re: evilbunny's 2nd and 3rd and 4th animations

    thanks, i know i am probably low beginner and thx for the tips. i cant view your ani for some reason but i no what your getting at. i am not so good at the tremors so i am working on it.
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    wimpy kick (stiff at end soz)

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    Re: evilbunny's 2nd and 3rd and 4th animations

    Courtesy ? lol
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  6. #6
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    Re: evilbunny's 2nd and 3rd and 4th animations

    they good but choppy work on smoothness,stiffnes didnt look bad so ur ok there


 

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