My first pivot

is this a gud pivot for my first time

[kyle_s]

ok i'm gonna go ahead and say low-beginner work on everything and try to learn how to make ur effects on pivot not paint look up baha's tut the storyline was kinda good but it looked like u cut a piece out of a movie at least start it off like showing y he is running through a cave and why some random dude attacked him

[Blakcat]

Ok its REALLY stiffy, try easing and work on the story line. try not to have the walls just go away when he kicks them because that just looks bad. so work on that and you will be better in no time.