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  1. #1
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    Uncolored's Animations NEW! i give teh courtezy

    hey. all of my animations so far since ive started about a week ago:


    NEWEST:
    first sk8 board animation (creds to whom ever made the skateboard pack)


    smoothness test (read a tutorial) did it work?



    a try at a smooth combo



    trying to work on easing, hope it worked.
    http://img399.imageshack.us/my.php?image=easeic4.gif

    walk test
    http://img368.imageshack.us/my.php?image=walkwk6.gif

    beam test
    http://img502.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... mupxw8.gif

    unleashed (i got the stick figure from a site somewhere. droid i think it was called)
    http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... egovz7.gif


    please comment. rank? im guessing low beg, but who knows.
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    Re: Uncolored's Pivot Theatre !!!

    W00t first comment , on to the animations

    walk test: pritty good..your arms are wierd tho, keep them straight at all times

    run test: link broken, fix that.

    beam test: the noob was really stiff and when he fell he had no easing, the actual beam was pritty good but when he was floating try not to have anything bend..it think it lookes better if its straight

    unleached: run up the wall was great..( i cant do it atall lol)..him grabing the gun was wierd..probably because he was floating when he shot. overall quite good.

    overview of the animation: low-med begginger..closer to med...good movements, go check out some tutorials on easing

    AND dont post comments like this
    Quote Originally Posted by Uncolored
    i really like them ! i think your ideas are unique, and the cheese tower one was my favorite. i voted low-inter


    courtesy?
    your not going to get many courtesys because u didnt say what u thought was bad/what they needed to work on and it was a really short comment, mindue keep up the nice-ness...meh

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    Re: Uncolored's Pivot Theatre !!!

    I said your med-beginner.

    Your walk animation was stiff, and the stick didn't walk right.

    The run animation link is broken.

    The beam animation... I didn't get. I see the stick flying all over the place and then he shoot a beam out of his ass. >.<

    I likt the last one the best. It look smoother than the other animations. You need to fixed some of the physics there but it was overall good.

    Courtesy?

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    Re: Uncolored's Pivot Theatre !!!

    Hey,

    First of all, are you sure these are one of your firsts ones? Anyways, i think your animations need more effort in them. Your smoothness is ok for first ones, but when you work with using easing, it will look much better. Start with easing, and look at more tutorials. Low-med beg, keep up the good work!

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    Re: Uncolored's Pivot Theatre !!!

    new one. bump. please comment
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    Re: Uncolored's Pivot Theatre !!!

    That was very good, however, the kick and the other stick were not eased well enough to tell the difference between non-eased and eased.
    Med begginer.
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    Re: Uncolored's Pivot Theatre !!!

    BUMP-de-BUMP



    2 new ones
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    Re: Uncolored's Animations NEW! i give teh courtezy

    they were ok, i liked the unleashed one the best, it was the most well animated i would say, idk if that is your newest but its the best one, i think that one is med-high beginner, the rest are low-med beginner, so ya, but good job jus keep it up, courtesy returned

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    Re: Uncolored's Animations NEW! i give teh courtezy

    1. Ok the skate one was smooth for the most part but when he jumped the ramp the physics were off

    2. The easing test was very nice i think you nailed it.

    3. The combo was a little choppy but for the most part it was smooth.

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