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  • ZOMG THIS IS THE SHIZZLE

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  1. #1
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    my first DD animation =D

    all crit and tips appreciated ty

  2. #2
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    Re: my first DD animation =D

    that was a pretty good animation man
    are the arms part of the stk or
    just random circles?



  3. #3
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    Re: my first DD animation =D

    I think you are low-medium beginner.

    The animation overall didn't really make sense, but some good and bad things were contained in it.

    The sticks
    I did quite like the sticks. They were inventive and cool, and made the animation liven up a tiny bit more. The only bit I didn't get was those circles following them. What were
    they?
    Your animating
    I think this wasn't the best bit of your animating, which is kind of the part that you have to be good at. There wasn't really any easing used and some bit were quite stiff.
    For a tutorial on easing click here.
    For a tutorial on smoothness click here.

    I think you should also go to Darren's ultimate tutorial as I have told people countless times before, It will make you more knowledgable on pivot and hopefully your animating skill will go up.
    Keep it up!

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    Re: my first DD animation =D

    Quote Originally Posted by perish
    I think you are low-medium beginner.

    The animation overall didn't really make sense, but some good and bad things were contained in it.

    The sticks
    I did quite like the sticks. They were inventive and cool, and made the animation liven up a tiny bit more. The only bit I didn't get was those circles following them. What were
    they?
    Your animating
    I think this wasn't the best bit of your animating, which is kind of the part that you have to be good at. There wasn't really any easing used and some bit were quite stiff.
    For a tutorial on easing click here.
    For a tutorial on smoothness click here.

    I think you should also go to Darren's ultimate tutorial as I have told people countless times before, It will make you more knowledgable on pivot and hopefully your animating skill will go up.
    Keep it up!

    The circles were hands =D

  5. #5
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    Re: my first DD animation =D

    Quote Originally Posted by Im behind you >=D
    Quote Originally Posted by perish
    I think you are low-medium beginner.

    The animation overall didn't really make sense, but some good and bad things were contained in it.

    The sticks
    I did quite like the sticks. They were inventive and cool, and made the animation liven up a tiny bit more. The only bit I didn't get was those circles following them. What were
    they?
    Your animating
    I think this wasn't the best bit of your animating, which is kind of the part that you have to be good at. There wasn't really any easing used and some bit were quite stiff.
    For a tutorial on easing click here.
    For a tutorial on smoothness click here.

    I think you should also go to Darren's ultimate tutorial as I have told people countless times before, It will make you more knowledgable on pivot and hopefully your animating skill will go up.
    Keep it up!

    The circles were hands =D
    kinda like in the madness games.

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    Re: my first DD animation =D

    yeah it seems like madness combat, although its very stiff and uneased, what fps did you use? anyway low beg, i think you'll get better, did you use onion skin?, if not thats really good

    courtesy?
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    Re: my first DD animation =D

    Welcome to the Forum!

    Put more frames between the movements and apply easing in they....
    Improve the physics, it's inreal
    Improve the impectus and the fall too, and read tutorials, like the Baha's Tutorial....

    Cortesy?
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    Sorry by my bad english...


 

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