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  • [color=#0000FF:29ta4338]High Beginner[/color:29ta4338]

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  • [color=#0040FF:29ta4338]High Beginner - Borderline[/color:29ta4338]

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    Senior Member Kanon's Avatar

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    Neru's Thread - Aiming 4 inters pl0x!

    RULES

    1. Don't bump - I'll do that xD
    2. Click me Before Asking for courtesy!
    3. No Flaming - Like " Omfg you suck at pivot, Bastard!"
    4. No Swearing - Or at least keep it down to 1.
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    Hi there. My Real name is Nelson. I use neru because its a part of my japanese name xD.
    My School holidays started just a week ago so i have another week until its over. I might
    be making more Animations than usual. I hope you enjoy my Animations.

    Key:
    Light Blue - You can rate these, they are some of my best Animations.
    Green - Kind of good, You can also Rate this.
    Red - O.K. animations, but don't rate these.
    Dark red - Really bad, definitely do not rate these. These eat poop.

    P.S. From top to bottom is newest to oldest (So the ones on top are the new ones and the
    ones one the bottom are the old ones.)

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    BEST

    Blood 'n' Walk test *Click for piv*

    - I liked the blood in this one and the walk was well eased.

    Parkour Phail *Click for piv*

    - The walking in this animation was also well eased, i also liked the tremor when he
    hit his head on the wall.

    Blud Test
    - my first Blood test. Very good, and i think i used enough particles lol. I concentrated on
    physics really hard when the head was going up and down.

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    NEW

    Forks hurt *Click for piv*

    - This one is really smooth, and its also my avatar xD.

    Crash *Un-finished*
    - I would just call this a running test, this is un-finished and i will never finish it xD.

    Beam
    - I personally like this one because it looks cool when the things disintegrated. Click the
    name for the no background version.

    Super Midget
    - It took me a lot of time to make the world and the clouds, but i think it turned out good.

    Failed elements *Click for piv*
    - Like i said, it was failed. I thought it was gonna turn out good =/.

    DDBC Entry Phail
    - As i said, it turned out crap. So i did a joint with ~XgotheX~ But I'm not going to show
    you Cause' I'm not aloud.

    Running Test
    - Nah, i dont really like this.

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    Old Junk

    Speed test
    - Whee! Whee! Whee! lol, just a speed test loop.

    Running test
    - my first running test with some easing.

    Ouch, My head!
    - this would of hurt, anyways i used some easing and i accidentally did a little bump when he fell.

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    ART

    Training On Stones
    - I like this one because of the BFS ( Big Fat Sword) That i made. Also because its reflection.

    Oh Shiz
    - My first Art Attempt. I give Credits to the person who gave me the fire stk's.

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    CREDITS

    Peter Bone - Pivot xD
    Paint - Background
    Friends - Motivation
    Droidz - Some stks
    Darkdemon - To show my animations
    Sticky magic - for the idea of Combo. ( sorry i forgot to add you =/)
    Frozen Fire - For some bases.
    BRFW - My friend :3.
    Anyone else i forgot please tell me.

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    Senior Member lackoflol's Avatar

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    Re: Neru's Thread - Aiming 4 inters pl0x!

    wow, you should get moved to inter soon (I think). You should ease a bit more, and on the beam, try to go back into your animation and fix the spot where the guy simply stops in midair right before he fires the beam. It should flow smoothly, without the stop, and that animation would be almost perfect. I like it whenthe stickfigures disentigrate.

    P.S. I only give criticism to animations I think are really good, but not quite perfect so the animator can perfect their animations.

    P.P.S. The "Blud Test" is way better than what I can do 'cos your more patient with that than me.

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    Re: Neru's Thread - Aiming 4 inters pl0x!

    ...Hmm...you need to improve some movements [your running test,the second step of the stick,it was a long time in the air :P...and other movements are a bit stiff...]...your easing,phisics,and foot placement. Make longer animations,try to use all of your inspiration and potencial to have a cool animation ...put BGS and many movements...the beam in your new animation,need more details...it are so simple,and need more impact...but i liked the desintegration effect ...training more,and good luck! ;D...courtesy?

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    Senior Member Kanon's Avatar

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    Re: Neru's Thread - Aiming 4 inters pl0x!

    Bump D:

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    Senior Member Kanon's Avatar

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    Re: Neru's Thread - Aiming 4 inters pl0x!

    Sorry for Double post but I've got a new animation:

    Parkour Phail


    :P

    Also added Blood 'n' walk test


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    Re: Neru's Thread - Aiming 4 inters pl0x!

    I do not know much about the English, then I will comment

    your walk is good
    but i don't like the physics
    Keep trained

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    Senior Member lackoflol's Avatar

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    Re: Neru's Thread - Aiming 4 inters pl0x!

    Cool. I like the blood in the walking animation. Good easing and physics. I'd say you're currently borderline beginner/inter.

    Courtesy?
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    Senior Member Kanon's Avatar

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    Re: Neru's Thread - Aiming 4 inters pl0x!

    Quote Originally Posted by PivExpert
    Cool. I like the blood in the walking animation. Good easing and physics. I'd say you're currently borderline beginner/inter.

    Courtesy?
    How about telling me what i should work on D:, not just telling me what I'm good at D:.

    - Neru

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    Re: Neru's Thread - Aiming 4 inters pl0x!

    Parkour Phail


    It's a pretty good animation, walking looked pretty good as you've said on the first page. The running wasn't so good. He needs to stretch his legs out more, it seemed more of a powerwalk.
    Click For Run Tut

    Nice idea with the push off the wall, but to deliver more force, you should of again stretched out his legs.

    Nice comical ending, with a some more practice and you could go far.

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    Re: Neru's Thread - Aiming 4 inters pl0x!

    going along with what plan b said work on the running and walknig a smoothen out the movements high beginer.
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