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  1. #1
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    artrutio's thread

    im new to DD and need help with things like easing ETC

    a twist with cookiemonster base and stickman
    http://upd.animatorhost.com/artrutio/twistshadepdd.gif
    a punch- stomp :3
    http://upd.animatorhost.com/artrutio/tow_smacku428.gif
    1 of my best animations
    http://upd.animatorhost.com/artrutio/name_sir8df9.gif
    red vs. blue 1
    http://upd.animatorhost.com/artrutio/red_vsgkah.gif
    red vs. blue 2
    http://upd.animatorhost.com/artrutio/red_vsgb0n.gif
    running thats good, but dosent loop well
    http://upd.animatorhost.com/artrutio/hay9itd.gif
    animation that really sucks
    http://upd.animatorhost.com/artrutio/dsgfh37mb.gif
    cannon no editing
    http://upd.animatorhost.com/artrutio/hayhayhaynbio.gif


    there are problems with these comment please to give me tips

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    Re: artrutio's thread

    Well the first tip I would have is to check out bahas thread, also to linkstuff with words like:
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    Or show the image like:

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    Re: artrutio's thread

    Quote Originally Posted by artrutio
    a twist with cookiemonster base and stickman
    http://upd.animatorhost.com/artrutio/twistshadepdd.gif
    LOEL WHOS BASE?!
    WHOS THAT LOL

    I would say low beginner, work on stiffness and movement.

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    Re: artrutio's thread

    The Top Animation::
    The stickman that kicks the default stick when he is walking it looks like he is just skipping over to the default stick and kicking him not walking. As he is trying to walk it is also uneased and the back is stiff so is the head. The arms look weird not moving in tell the end and then they just like fly to the side then come back to the stick really fast. The kick did not have enough power on it to kick the default of the ground. In the kick when he is bringing the leg down it is going really slow not eased at all it is going the same speed really slow. The default doesn't really looked eased but it is the closest to it, it goes up slow the suddenly stops at the top. The bounce wasn't eased.

    Send me the pivot in a Pm and I can remake the animation or edit it and show you all your mistakes if I didn't explain right.

    The punch stomp animation:
    When his arm is going up to punch the rest of the body looks dead its stiff everywhere, and the part where it is going up looks really slow uneased just plain weird. When he punches you just made the arm thrust forward not the whole body, To help you with the stiffness move every joint on the stick on every frame. Even if the stick is so pose to stay their make him sway back and forth, for example like brad dose. I will put the link for the animation at the bottom. The reaction for the other stick when he gets punched is simply awful, instead of falling to the floor he should be hit backward and easing the back and like moving his arms for a strike or something. The stomp, as he walked to go stomp it looked like he just moved with one leg as the other was in the air and the stomp looked funky to.

    One of your best animation's Animation (olol)::
    Well I dont see why that was your best the top animation was better than that. When he was blinking in he should be moving as he is blinking in it looks like he is dead and life less. Always move the stick or it looks like your to lazy to make him alive or moving. When he is jumping you should make him bend down before he jumps because it looks like he is just walking then like flies up. When he landed on the rock it looked like you just duplicated the frame and made him stay on the rock. As he is moving his foot to the rock it looks jerky all around and everywhere. When he pushes of and hits the rock it is uneased and the movements are really bad. When he hits his back on the rock it just like hits it and stays their and the legs just fall they dont even flop.

    Work on::
    Easing (mostly)
    Movements (that too)
    Stiffness(mostly all your animations are stiff)

    Move all the joints on the stick and keep the stick moving at all times or the animation looks dull and shitty.
    Links::
    The link so you can see what I ment by making the stick sway when it is so pose to be standing still but still keep it moveing.
    http://upd.animatorhost.com/beerad312/Grenadeoyrn.piv
    Credit's: Brad
    Pm me if you need any help I will try my best to help you out.

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    Re: artrutio's thread

    Quote Originally Posted by Cookie Monster
    Quote Originally Posted by artrutio
    a twist with cookiemonster base and stickman
    http://upd.animatorhost.com/artrutio/twistshadepdd.gif
    LOEL WHOS BASE?!
    WHOS THAT LOL

    I would say low beginner, work on stiffness and movement.
    low beginner??? wow i suck very badly

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    Re: artrutio's thread

    yer u kinda do but work on proper movments and easing, lok at bahas tut


 

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