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    UPDATE{SmC}

    Hey,I'm StickMayCry and finally,I joined.LoL
    After releasing my new animation without getting ANY comments on my thread in stickpage.I decided I should join.
    So heres my animation.I'll also be posting my other previous animations.


    NEWEST TO OLDEST(not to old)
    UPDATE

    Newest-

    http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/1935/smcrisesko3.gif

    http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/4...utoanimlb7.gif

    http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/4...mingnblzz4.gif


    C&C Please&Thank You,

    SmC

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    Re: Best Beginner in the BH?{SmC}

    no. But u are rather good, u seemed to have easing under control, but u have serois stiffness problems the the back. mabye check out some tutorials, make a longer animation, add a storyline, get rid of the stiffness, keep doing what your doing, and u should be inters in no time

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    High begginer, mabye, keep up the good work

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    Re: Best Beginner in the BH?{SmC}

    Thanks for the comment.Hmm,this place has direct commenting/criticizing.I'ma stick here for a while.

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    Re: Best Beginner in the BH?{SmC}

    I wouldn't say the BEST beginner .__.
    The foot placements are awful, in real life if your feet are jumping they don't randomly slide across the floor, the stay in the same place. Keep it realistic. Easing and effects are pretty good though. High beginner.

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    Re: Best Beginner in the BH?{SmC}

    To call yourself the best around here, you have to prove that.

    And to me, you have not done so.

    Your animations have an OK level of easing, which definately could be better, but it will get you going for now. the stiffness is what I hate, aswell as theb right colours you incorerate, its harder to see the stk!

    IMO, if you want to have bright stks, you need a dark back ground. It is simply all about presentation. Explosions and effects wont be as... effective... excuse the pun, if you make your stuff really bright all the time.


    trust me on that one.



    You will only get better in time, hopefully sooner rather than later, I can see you improving very quickly.


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    Re: Best Beginner in the BH?{SmC}

    UPDATE



    Just made a 3D test and a double framing epic punch test plus my siggy stick test.All those sticks were made by me!xD

    C&C

    The moves above are a first.Mostly the 3D is my first.

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    Re: Best Beginner in the BH?{SmC}

    To be honest, there isn't much to criticize. While in most scenarios this would be a good thing, it's not here. The reason I can't say much is because you didn't do much with the sticks.

    I see some flashy camera movements. I see some slightly varied stick angles. I see... wait, no I don't. There is no stick movement. I don't care how good your camera angles are - if you can't make the stick move, then you aren't ready to advance to the next rank.

    You had a good sequence in the most recent animation with the red guy punching the blue dude, but that is just about all the movement I see in the majority of your animations.

    If you want inter, you better work less on flashy effects and more on the basics.

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    Re: Best Beginner in the BH?{SmC}

    easing = check
    moving all joints = check
    good ideas = check
    fading = check
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    overall ranking
    thinking...thinking...thinking...
    thinking...thinking...thinking...
    thinking...thinking...thinking...
    thinking...thinking...thinking...
    thinking...thinking...thinking...
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    LOW INTERZ!

    COURTESY?

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    Re: UPDATE{SmC}

    the naruto aniation made no sense what so evr

    Plan B - Try and post a comment that the animator can use to help him out and improve.

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    Re: UPDATE{SmC}

    .....Delete that stupid post.It made no sence.This is bad,more and more shitty comments are comming from noobs more often.If you can't post don't post.I don't care weather you think if its fast.Go die in a hole.

    These are one of my comments from stickpage

    lol, was ther any point in that?
    u couldve just updated the old thred u had
    made me lol a bit

    ATLEAST HE ACTUALLY GAVE A BIT OF COMMENTARY!NOT LIKE EDWARD0


 
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