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    Joshua112321's animation page!

    Well this is my animation page so...
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    ooh!

    I thought it was good.

    WOOT!!!

    First med animation

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    Re: Joshua112321's animation page!

    those are awesome
    way way better than anything i can do

    keep up the good work
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    Re: Joshua112321's animation page!

    Right, you may have seen my replies elsewhere, in whcihc case, brace yourself..


    These could be better, much better...

    The movements are way too big, and way to fast for me to make sense of. I know, mine are really slow, but this to me, is how I know how to animate, so I run with it, and look, smooth as silk!

    anyway...

    These are ok, but the flaws you have are very common for us beginners...

    Easing, Physics... etc. etc.

    look up some tuts, keep at it etc.


    You have some of the ideas, but not all of the practicality of being able to do them.

    do the basics, and the rest falls into place naturally =]


    good job man.
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    Re: Joshua112321's animation page!

    "Move every joint in every frame or at least try"
    Also you might want to try to practice some easing.
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    Re: Joshua112321's animation page!

    Try to make it more fluid, use more frames for all movements.
    I dont like the way the stickman change his color when hes goign to jump :/
    Anyway, thats nice, id say med beg.
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    Re: Joshua112321's animation page!

    1st animation: Need to have more easing, after the heavy spacing, and dont just have frames of nothing happening, like after he bend down

    3rd animation: it was a black stickman that triped them up before the countdown finished

    Overall: work on easing, phisics, stiffness, and choppyness
    dont feel bad, all beginers have this problem

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    Re: Joshua112321's animation page!

    Your newer ones are pretty good, try maybe slowing down the movements and giving them force it looks like a big ball of stuff when the two guys fought.

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    Re: Joshua112321's animation page!

    Your newest is rather stiff and choppy. Rein in the color changing, because that's the main cause of the problem. And, don't make too much of a pause between movements, because you'll probably never make it to inter that way. Good job though, so...... med beginner, I guess.
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    Re: Joshua112321's animation page!

    Ok, i see a lot of stiffness and not enough easing, its smooth but you need to work on physics (Easing, etc). To fix your stiffness, try and move every joint so for eg, everyones always moving, so its just crap to leave one arm and just move your other arm like a weirdo. Overall, med beginner, Work on stiffness and physics, 7.6/10.

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    Re: Joshua112321's animation page!

    Stiffness... nice animations! but you need to work on stiffness and easing k? maybe physics too... your first med ani. was a lil' choppy so you might wana fix that... very creative animations lol i liked the med one.. lol but i kinda hurts my eyes... xD courtesy Returned! Medium Beg..
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