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    Phonys section

    sorry but its alot of pages back in beginners hall1'

    My Tests:
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    I am gonna edit the walk later lol, so that is obsolete

    what is my rank based on run?
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    Re: Phonys section

    Med Beginner for the run.
    The legs are good, but the back is stiff.
    Also, remember to move the orange dot up and down.
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    Re: Phonys section

    Lol Hi!
    Yea.........what muffin said.
    Don't forget about physics.
    Nice smooth anis, but work on easing it's the key to success.

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    Re: Phonys section

    Nice, keep it up!
    The arms in the walk seem abit odd but you said youd edit it so ye.
    The run is in a zero gravity zone... and also his head needs to bob abit, he has a pole up his back it seems...
    other than that, try using a floor stick other than just the bottom of the animation area, youll be suprised at the difference (have the feet slightly under for that 3D effect) other than that, all I can say is read Baha's tut and some others, try and have longer animations other than just tests. also, try to have more than one person in the animation, be adventurous, its the only way to get better. have some interaction, violence, maybe blood e.t.c. text is always a good one aswell.
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    Re: Phonys section

    okay, ill do what you all said and come back with a edited one

    right now i am getting down the basics of pivo again, i stopped fro a month so im restarting with the basics, getting good with them

    and also

    i feel like i have accomplished more if i didnt use a tut :P lol

    thanks for help, will post in a bit
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    Re: Phonys section

    okay, now i got a fall test...



    what ya think?

    Run:
    with ought bounce:


    with bounce:


    feet moving:


    SS-Try not to double post in your own thread, just edit your last post and post it on that. Just keep that in mind.
    and SS, okay
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    Re: Phonys section

    i decided to bump, too lazy to make a new one

    this is my first attempt at no onion skin



    what you think

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    Re: Phonys section

    i hate it to make running, your look really good to me.
    you have talent.
    now you can make some longer videos.
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    Re: Phonys section

    thanks, i will so you can get an accurate no onion rating lol
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    Re: Phonys section

    Hey Phonymouse whats up?
    lol...

    Pretty cool ani's, but with the running that had no onionskin, i think all of it was good, except for his right-arm at the end, it was really shaky to me and that made it a bit odd....ease that up a bit, also, on the first running ani's, the guys r kinda sloppy, so just smooth it....good job though!



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