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    Newguys Animations

    These are all of my animations. I am comepletely new to pivot so they are sorta bad. i just need some good comments with things i need to improve on. Thanks
    -Newguy


    http://**********.com/img/1226173693.gif Easing Test

    http://**********.com/img/1226248099.gif Wu Battle (Bad )

    http://**********.com/img/1226177076.gif Walking Test

    http://**********.com/img/1226178526.gif Puching Test

    http://**********.com/img/1226185148.gif First Gun Try

    http://**********.com/img/1226281027.gif First Gun Battle

    Side Notes:
    -Sorry about the legs during punching test. i was trying to fix something but it turned out to be a mess.
    -If anyone knows why my walking test goes so fast please tell me.
    -The First Gun Try is really my first. I havent watched any tuts on it so dont blame me if its bad.



    Sorry about that double threading i didnt know.

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    Re: Newguys Animations

    The easing test wasn't very well eased. To show that it is eased, you should space it out a little more, make the arm rise up faster then slowly start to ease it untill it stops.

    The walking tests was okay, but has some problems. The foot placement was off, to make it look like the stick is walking more realisticly you should keep the foot in the same spot as it was before untill it lifts off of the ground. Also I thought the stick moved across the screen too fast; the stick is walking, it shouldn't be moving that fast.

    Anyway the two that I saw were pretty good, just a couple of problems here and there.

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    Re: Newguys Animations

    Thank you very much. A person who finally posted.

    About the walking. I was wondering why it went so fast. I followed a tutorial and it went very fast. The easing- thank you for telling me about the spaceing. I will kepp on practiceing. Anyone else please post more comments.

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    Re: Newguys Animations

    hey welcome to dd yea the prevoius post was right but also do some more tests and don't post em just keep practising and compare them to the tuts u followed. also try to move all the limbs when ever u punch or kick if your really stuck wacth some kung fu movies and study there movments. that little grey thing that the stick leaves behind helps when it comes to runing and walking then try to make a nice ani.
    I crave comments if i don't get a comment in the first 2 hours IM FREAKING OUT

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    Re: Newguys Animations

    A new walk. Not sure if its worst or better but......



    http://**********.com/img/1226204178.gif

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    Re: Newguys Animations

    nah your still not getting it keep practising though
    I crave comments if i don't get a comment in the first 2 hours IM FREAKING OUT

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    http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=50545

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    Re: Newguys Animations

    Thanks for the positive encouragement guys. I really like this pivot fourm!!!




    Oh by the way please start ranking my animations. Low beg-
    Med Beg-High Beg Please.

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    Re: Newguys Animations

    eyy, u need to work on ur easing test like so...

    |-|--|---|----|----|---|--|-|

    and when u are walking, make his foot that hes stepping on stay in same place untill his other foot hits the ground..

    ur gun test was ok but try not to make it look like hes dancing on floor :S lawl

    ur punch test...
    hmm, work on physics and easing for punching, the guy that got hit. his back was like WHOAH!? try to make his body and legs move back with easing and physics :3

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    Re: Newguys Animations

    Thank you i will update my animations.

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    Re: Newguys Animations

    New Update!!!- Look For-"First Gun Battle" And Also "First Wu Battle(Bad)".


 
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