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  1. #1
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    Please rate my first real animation

    Please rate, comment and give me advice on my first real animation. The first one is the one that I put alot of effort into and the second one is the possible design of the continuation.






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    Re: Please rate my first real animation

    Okey Dokey Very good for your first, you used some advanced techniques such as the trail things when he twirls the stick, and the growing of front of the pole. Now some things you should work on: Your animations were choppy, make smaller movements in every frame, also move every joint in every frame, sounds like it will take forever, but it makes your animation look SO much better. Also, your guys are very stiff, like when he threw the staff, make his back bend instead of just his arm. Very good for your first, keep up the good work and keep animating!
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    Re: Please rate my first real animation

    It's not that bad and it's not that good. it's stiff. keep animating
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    Re: Please rate my first real animation

    Thanks guys! I knew there were something wrong when he threw the stick, so I tried moving his legs, but I didn't know his back was the problem. Thank you very much I;ll keep on pivoting!


 

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