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    UnHeardOf's Animations (UPDATED)

    Hello, UnHeardOf here.These are my animations. Enjoy and Please Comment. =)

    Newest Animation: ( December 14)




    Smoothness and stiffness test(Nov.18):

    One of my first:


    Please comment and tell me what i can do better. At what rank do you think im at, and i would also like to know some tips on how i can become a better animator myself.
    If you know any tuts on good spin kicks please tell me. Thank You
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    Our Animations~ They start as ideas, then turn into scenes, then becomes "the" movie

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    Re: My begginers animation

    That was cool, Easing and physics were a bit off but besides that, It was nice. BTW welcome to DD!

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    Re: My begginers animation

    You did good, like a lot of your ideas, but some physics were off and a little stiff at moments. But overall really good. Keep it up!

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    Re: My begginers animation

    the punch was good but it was from a tutorial try to come up with your own i deas thats what makes a pivot special in my mind. medium begginer
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    Re: My begginers animation

    Hey bro! Just returning your courtesy! Very good for your fist time! I would say low-med beginner. The main problem with your animations was that they were stiff. Getting rid of stiffness is VERY easy, it may sound like a lot, but you have to move EVERY joint in EVERY frame. It gets rid of stiffness and will make your stickmen move more realistically. Very good for your first anims! Keep up the good work!
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    Re: My begginers animation

    hey welcome to DD what the other guys said rings true u do need to work on stiffness and easing i also detected a hint of choppyness though im not sure if this the correct term but u were doing some heavy spacing in the top ani i think u should try just to get the basics down first before tryin stuff like that. try to make a longer ani possibly 20+++ seconds and work on your movments in the sense of realism here at DD we crave realism and fuildness other wise welcome and good luck.

    P.S tut are awsome they help
    I crave comments if i don't get a comment in the first 2 hours IM FREAKING OUT

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    Re: My begginers animation

    Stiffness is gone, but you have to work on easing. Especially when your stick man is walking or running. Otherwise, good, and i like the base stick you use
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    Re: My begginers animation

    Yo i liked the newest one especially the slow mo. That was nice. Smoothness was very good, and so was easing. Good work.

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    Re: UnHeardOf's Animations

    Hey you got slo mo down in my eyes but my eyes are special.
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    Re: UnHeardOf's Animations

    Pretty nice. Work on stiffness and easing, though. But you've got potential, check out tutorials, practice. You're gonna be Intermediate for sure!

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