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    My first ani's :D

    Hello i'm Miknert. I'm a new animator(i started yesterday) this is my first animation.
    Please tell me what you think

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    Re: My first ani :D

    Really choppy, but its kinda good for a first ani. I suggest looking at some tutorials,(Baha's my fav!) Practice smoothing!
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    Re: My first ani :D

    Very good for a first but the legs were a little to far apart, and he moved to fast for a running animation, unless he was Sasquatch.



    This man has been walking like your stickfigure and has seemed to split his pants.

    Choppy too.

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    Re: My first ani's :D

    New Animation

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    Re: My first ani's :D

    it's look like walking, not running. look at baha's tut. it's a perfect tut!
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    Re: My first ani's :D

    The Beam is too stiff, and the run doesn't look like a run, it looks like he's taking VERY long strides in his walk.

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    Re: My first ani's :D

    Yeah. once you get better i suggest you add more to your beams. And that run was to choppy. But keep up the good work.



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    Re: My first ani's :D

    sup. don't work on stiffness or easing just yet. you to new to under stand it. yet. first work on smoothness(less space between the frames )like this is smooth.../-/-/-/-/-/-/ not like this /--/---/--/---/--/----/----/---/ and other stuff. then make you spacing like thia. l-l--l--l---l----l--l-l(now really small spacing.) then work on stiffnes. go to the master tutoiral suction . to get there you go to darkdemon.org-> Pivot tutorials-> in the anounce ment go to "the Masters tutorial section. and lok for what you want. look at some other comments too! hope this helps

    for exapple he should come realy slow..then faster..then REALY big spacing..normal spacing, then small and SMALL! that sould kinda eplain it.


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