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  1. #1
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    Zack9901's 1st animation on DD

    yeah pls dont be so harsh
    feel free to criticize and tell me whats wrong ill
    improve...eventually...
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    Re: Zack9901's 1st animation on DD

    That was pretty good. Try to make the fps of the animation a little higher next time so it will look more smooth. Other than that I'd say low to med-beginner.
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    Re: Zack9901's 1st animation on DD

    Damn that was pretty good for your first animation. Nice easing with the arm, but it was pretty stiff.

    Yes, cliched review, isn't it?But just remember to move every joint at least minorly in a minimum of every 4 frames (but preferrably every single frame).

    Also, up the framerate a bit (Frame Delay to 6, Shrink Frames to 1/2, "Merge" unchecked)

    Awesome slow-mo by the way, you've got a lot of potential. I'd say low-medium beginner, keep animating.

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    Re: Zack9901's 1st animation on DD

    Gee...
    thanks guyz for commenting and thx for the tips
    ill keep it in mind in my next animations
    I need to hatch or i DIE...Please make a widdle dwagons dweam come twue and click me pwease !

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    Re: Zack9901's 1st animation on DD

    that was good, nice job, just a few problems: slow fps, stiff (move every red dot in every frame to get rid of stiffness), easing was preaty good (eccept when he wen't full speed strait away, but he was like superhuman wasn't he?, but yeah it was good, keep up the good work, also add a background and a story line, tha will get you a better rank

    i'd say you med-high begginer that's good for you first, keep it up

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