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    =TriPz PivoT Palace=TPP NEW! Now returning courtesy xD

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    Well, im fairly new to Dark Demon. Not so much new with pivot so I'll upload a few of my animations, to see what my skill level is. But more about me, Lets see I rate people's animations harshly so I guess you may do the same. I was a high beginner till I stopped animating for awhile, Not sure what I am now ;P. My old pivot name use to be "Pivot Jedi" so you'll probably see a PJ in a couple of my animations. And well I want to get more into animating, I don't have much motivation to keep me going so it's probably why I don't post much animations. But I am a good freind of terkoiz, thats another thing. Lets see.. what else, Eh got nothing hope you guys enjoy the animations.



















    Gravity zero- http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x109 ... wesome.gif

    Kickflip-
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    Combo Attempt
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    Re: =TriPz PivoT Palace=TPP

    the puch is nice and kinda slow. but its amuetur easing and you might want to get rid of the shayness too.
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    Re: =TriPz PivoT Palace=TPP

    good punch. but it's kinda slow. can you make it a little faster?
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    Re: =TriPz PivoT Palace=TPP

    Bump :P.
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    Re: =TriPz PivoT Palace=TPP

    I don't think you can bump without adding an animation...did you just add the backflip one?

    Anyway, you've got fairly nice movements and un-stiffness. However, the feet are a bit shaky and you are adding in quite a few unnecessary frames which make the animations seem slow. Sometimes, even if you think it will turn choppy, there will be movements that ARE fast. It's all about easing and spacing, you should check out this tutorial (IT'S NOT BAHA'S!)

    viewtopic.php?f=36&t=5173

    Medium Beginner, I would say is your rank. Keep animating

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    Re: =TriPz PivoT Palace=TPP

    Ahh pretty cool tutorial thanks for the critque. Btw Yea I'm sure I need to watch the foot placement. Not much to complain about though that's something I can probably do. But yea I see the unneccessary frames, Just that I don't want it much choppy :/. Thanks ;P.
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    Re: =TriPz PivoT Palace=TPP

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    Re: =TriPz PivoT Palace=TPP

    Edit: New Layout :].
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    Re: =TriPz PivoT Palace=TPP NEW! Now returning courtesy xD

    Try speed up your anis and work on easing. Also work on longer anis and you'll get a higher rank soon.

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    Re: =TriPz PivoT Palace=TPP NEW! Now returning courtesy xD

    That skating animation was good. Just some basic flaws like a bit of stiffness and choppiness. Just practice those off. Also, there would be no harm in easing a little bit more, but you're doing pretty well. For now med-beginner.

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