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    Hey, guys. I'm back, for good. *"Seven" [Unfinished]*

    Newest on top, oldest on bottom. Newest will also be in img format. Other animations will be links.

    Seven [Unfinished] :
    [img]http://**********.com/img/1228019560.gif[/img]

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    Throw [without effects]

    Punch Test
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    Re: Hey, guys. I'm back, for good.

    Rust is just lazyness.

    But still, thats not too bad, the foot looked odd at the end.
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    Re: Hey, guys. I'm back, for good.

    Hey! Welcome back Aura! Glad to see your animating again.

    The punch was ok. But I didn't really notice any easing in that animation. And I personally did not like the spacing either. But how fast you made it looked like the punch had real force to it. I liked that. Also the physics were slightly off on some parts of the stick. His foot looked weird how he slid it like that. The movements as well looked really choppy. Make sure you don't do anything like (l-l--l---l--l---l--l-l) It makes it look terrible. Easing helps get rid of choppiness as well. Make sure you use that on all your movements.
    Make sure you move every single joint on the stick figure per frame. It helps get rid of stiffness. And makes it look a lot more realistic.

    I know it was just a test. But I tihnk it would be a lot cooler if you added trails. Just to add some force to the punch. And a background. Just to add a touch to the animation because I personally like it.

    Im glad you started animating again Aura! Great work.

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    Re: Hey, guys. I'm back, for good.

    @Head/Hunter: Uhm... what? Rust is NOT laziness. I haven't animated in like 3-4 months. Its obvious that someone would get rusty after a period of time without doing something, especially a long one. Seeing as I was intermediate before, and am now beginner, I do indeed have rust.

    @Coke: Holy crap, no wonder you got Rank Team. Thanks for the huge comment, it'll really help.
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    Re: Hey, guys. I'm back, for good.

    Holy ballsacks you've gotten rusty. The punch was nice, but needed more DF and power. You should make a combo. Or we should do that joint we never got around to doing

    Courtesy?
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    Re: Hey, guys. I'm back, for good.

    Quote Originally Posted by tako
    Holy ballsacks you've gotten rusty. The punch was nice, but needed more DF and power. You should make a combo. Or we should do that joint we never got around to doing

    Courtesy?
    lol, yeah sure, courtesy on the way.
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    Re: Hey, guys. I'm back, for good.

    I liked it, but the only thing I noticed, is that you need a lot more easing through the whole body at the end of the punch. Thats all, keep it up and update more.

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    Re: Hey, guys. I'm back, for good.

    It was good just at the end the back took a sudden lurch back.
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    Re: Hey, guys. I'm back, for good.

    Ah, rust has hit you...
    Well, a simple punch animation is the best way to end an animation break. I think the punch itself was okay, but not the best. I liked how when the guy punched, he brought his leg up, and then lowered it. The foot placement was alright as well. However, I thought he brought his arm down a little too quickly, and it looked horribly choppy and stiff, so you might want to work on that. You still have some rust, and it's gonna take a while to regain your intermediate status, so good luck with that.
    Courtesy would be nice.

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    Re: Hey, guys. I'm back, for good. *UPDATE*

    Update, and I think I'm starting to get it back a little. I am actually really happy with this one:

    [img]http://**********.com/img/1227652185.gif[/img]
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