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    solar601's page

    i cleaned my profile and here is my anims

    anim 1: the animation that got be back into pivot


    anim 2: could of done better on this punch

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    Re: solar601's page

    Hey those were actually pretty good, for a begginer id reccomend the effects were filled makes em look more realistic.
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    [center:15ayceb7]Hollywood Undead.[/center:15ayceb7]

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    Re: solar601's page

    Animation 1:
    This one seemed a little stiff and shaky, and the effects didn't match up too good. Just move the stickfigure more and start easing. I'm sure Dark Ice has told you about easing.

    Animation 2:
    This is great. Nice movements, good easing. Overall great animation. Keep this up.

    Overall:
    N/A I will need to see a longer animation from you to see your style and decide what rank you are.

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    thanks guys

    thanks guys, i'll try make a longer animationg but i don't know how to use swords and not look like a noob at same time (<_<)

    (also, when i did a update, i got told not to doublepost, arn't updates exeptions?)

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    Re: solar601's page

    Whenever you update, just say: "Bump, new animation. Sorry for DP."
    The last part only applies if you double post, though.

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    Re: solar601's page

    OK, thanks dude ^^

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    Re: solar601's page

    You need to work on easing and stiffness and overall movements.
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    Re: solar601's page

    since i can't say "update"

    bump, new animation added

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    Re: solar601's page

    Low-Med Beginner I think...
    -There are Easing...
    -Is almost no choppy or/and Stiff
    But you must work on effects :P!
    When I look on your animations I think:
    "omg, nice basic... but WTF is with Effects xD"
    You have nice ideas,
    and If U will practise more,
    you will be Intermediate in no time!
    Keep It Up!

    Courtesy?

    -click, watch, and comment ^^
    Courtesy?

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    Re: solar601's page

    OH MY GOD, thank you dude! ^_^

    mind if you can help me because my tutor is busy with somthing else O_o?


 
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