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    Ambers Thread, "Ninja" Run.

    [center:iuxapsku]Yup even though I have been at Darkdemon for A year I still am a beginner...[/center:iuxapsku]
    [center:iuxapsku]Oh well.[/center:iuxapsku]
    [center:iuxapsku]Okay this is how My thread works, I Post my animations here and Hopefully they will be criticized fairly[/center:iuxapsku][center:iuxapsku]I do not want all this negative bullshit because I told you some criticism that hurt your feelings.[/center:iuxapsku][center:iuxapsku]Just remember I only speak my opinion.[/center:iuxapsku]


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    [center:iuxapsku]Animations[/center:iuxapsku]
    [center:iuxapsku]- Run test[/center:iuxapsku]
    [center:iuxapsku]- Glow test not much movement.[/center:iuxapsku]
    [center:iuxapsku]-Walking/FLashing test.[/center:iuxapsku]

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    Re: Ambers Thread *under construction*

    And where is said "ANI"?
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    Re: Ambers Thread *under construction*

    hey pm me when you get some animations to post, but for now locked

    *locked
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    Darky: ^^^Controversial?
    Amber, post a few animations in your topic before "making" it, make sure to construct it. I'm gonna make sure this stays unlocked for a good 3 days before you add your animations, but if not I'm gonna lock, okay?

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    Re: Ambers Thread *under construction*

    Quote Originally Posted by wowpivot
    hey pm me when you get some animations to post, but for now locked

    *locked
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    Darky: ^^^Controversial?
    Amber, post a few animations in your topic before "making" it, make sure to construct it. I'm gonna make sure this stays unlocked for a good 3 days before you add your animations, but if not I'm gonna lock, okay?
    Guys I'm not new here I accidentally hit "submit" before I added my animations, jeez.

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    Re: Ambers Thread

    I love how it looks like the camera is constantly moving. Keep it up.

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    Re: Ambers Thread

    ok Hai Amber.... I will rate all your animations,
    OK "glow Test" - Good glowing , but how do I rate this? I mean you could have made it look like he was flying os'o fast with trails or something, but its hard to respond to that.
    Throw test - Ok, it was alright, but you have a lot of stiffness, what you need to do ios follow the onion skin, you do that like, if your getting up, the back keeps in line with onion skin, same with legs and all the other parts.
    Walking/Flash Test - Ok, the walk was good, but it was stiff, only back stiff though, and its obviously your best one, but I like your ideas, keep it up.
    Med begginer for the one on the bottom.
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    nice comment bet it isnt stiffer then my cock
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    Re: Ambers Thread

    I appreciate your Critique Flipp, thanks I'll work on the stiffness in my next animation.


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    Re: Ambers Thread

    hey, like your anis , but they are a littlebit slow, try a higher framerate. but most of them where smooth so good job
    thread: http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=59&t=51174
    tell me what you think please...

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    Re: Ambers Thread

    Amber wrote:
    I do not want all this negative bullshit because I told you some criticism that hurt your feelings.
    Just remember I only speak my opinion.

    If we give you 'negative bullshit', then we speak our opinion only too.
    So quit the crap.

    Oh, and being one year at DD doesnt has to do anything with your pivot skills. >_>

    Now about the animations,
    take more time, and be sure to learn the basics first before you try anything fancy.

    The glow-test was pretty good though.
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    Re: Ambers Thread

    Lol your back.
    The throw test is ok, I like it. But the foot placement was reallt bad, and the shadow didn't even move at all. It also was in front of him when he took a step.
    Everything else is alright though.
    The color thingy test, was great. Even though there was no movements, I still liked it because there was a lot of colors fading and junk.
    My favorite one is the walking test though. Good form, nice floppy like arms, and pretty colorfull grenade
    Camera movements were nice, and the legs seemed like the knees didn't bend much.
    Everything else is ok.
    So Overall, I think you should add a little more easing, and get rid of all that stifness.
    Also pratice your foor placement, it's really off
    But otherwise nice work on all of them, I really hope to see more aniamtion from you man, nice work.
    Med Begginer.


 
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