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    Junior Member GodlydudeofGodlyness's Avatar
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    What am I doing wrong?

    I've been doing pivot for about a year now and still I dont see very much improvement
    this took me like 10 mins because I was bored but yet it still didn't look good to me... what am i doing wrong???





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    Re: What am I doing wrong?

    pretty stiff is one thing
    yo mama so fat when she was floating in the ocean, spain claimed her as the new world!
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    Fanatic Enthusiast Deimos's Avatar

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    Re: What am I doing wrong?

    you need to make more dynamic movement, move every joint in every frame, and like when the tremor came in, the dude who kicked didn't move down with the tremor, if he did it would have looked so much better, and don't worry, the more you practice, the better you will get.

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    Re: What am I doing wrong?

    I liked the type of combos you used, but to make them look even bettr you could of eased out each attack. The reactions on the other stick wasn't too bad, but instead of having him stand like a statue at the start you could of made him move back and notice that the attacking stick is attacking him. Anyway, nice work, I'm sure you will get better with easing movements after a little practice.


 

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