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Thread: Robot battle

  1. #1
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    Robot battle

    This is my first DD Pivot submit.

    I think it could use more work,and its not entirely finished. Also all of the stks used are not mine except for the slash wave thing.

    Comment and rate Please

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    Re: Robot battle

    The way you killed the frist robot was great (espically the blue sword), but when the 2nd robot was moving it was moving stiff and you didnt move the upperhalf. Mid-beginner mabye?

    Curtsy?

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    Re: Robot battle

    Yeah I got lazy but I worked hard in the beginning

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    Re: Robot battle

    I love the fight, the movements rocked and so did the effects, but you still need to work on easing, and fluidness.I think your med begginer, with a little bit of more work ull get better in no time. courtesy?

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    Re: Robot battle

    I liked all the effects. However some of the movements were off and it was a little stiff at times. Just work on that. Overall pretty good tho.

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    Re: Robot battle

    Thanks for the help Ill try and finish this as soon as possible.

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    Re: Robot battle

    That's good. I would say med-beginner.

    The effects are the best part about that movie. The sword effects, explosions and time freeze really make it look impressive. Just work a bit on the easing and stiffness and you will improve a bunch. Good job d(^.^d)

    Courtesy?
    If you say 1st Post, I'll EAT YOU.
    My Thread <<< Huzzah!

    I kinda feel sorry for default sticks.

  8. #8
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    Re: Robot battle

    For a begginer this was actually good, I just think putting a little-bit more time on these would help .
    Courtesy You're animation is awsome, mind telling me how good or bad mine is?

    Please give me an idea of how good or bad of an animator I am http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=51896

  9. #9
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    Re: Robot battle

    Wow thanks everyone do to your advice and this (http://fc91.deviantart.com/fs12/f/2006/ ... sion_1.swf)

    Ive made a new animation I'm about to post it now!


 

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