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    Keeping it together.

    Ok here's what i'm gonna start doing
    l =Best
    l =good
    l =fair
    l =poor
    l =sucks

    I'm not very new but, then again i'm not very good.


    BEGGINER Newwest to Oldest

    Sorta good but, not much(Credit to droidz for the eye and pistol).
    [img]http://**********.com/img/1228170982.gif[/img] l

    This is a blast test, not good but that's what happen's when you do it without an stk.
    [img]http://**********.com/img/1228432038.gif[/img] l

    After shot by the lazer he freeze's.
    [img]http://**********.com/img/1228084644.gif[/img] l

    After shot by the lazer he freeze's.
    [img]http://**********.com/img/1228021072.gif[/img] l


    So i'd really like to here some opinion's about it, just please don't make them harsh.
    Courtesy You're animation is awsome, mind telling me how good or bad mine is?

    Please give me an idea of how good or bad of an animator I am http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=51896

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    Re: Ok this is my first try soo....

    Well, first of all your optimism is great. Keep an attitude like that and YOU WILL get better.

    Onto your animation, I notice that unlike other starters, you put more effort into each frame, which is a good start. However, I think you put TOO MANY frames, which makes it look slow. Look at Baha's Ultimate Pivot Tutorial and the Movement Spacing Tutorial in the Pivot Tutorials Section. The beam was pretty good, shame you couldn't include it fully in the animation. I liked your attempt at blood. Wasn't too bad for a first.

    Courtesy? (Could you look at and comment on my thread? The link to it is in my signature picture)
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    Re: Ok this is my first try soo....

    Thank you for a nice comment, i'll try and do a bit better on my next attempt, accept it'll proabably be very different.
    Courtesy You're animation is awsome, mind telling me how good or bad mine is?

    Please give me an idea of how good or bad of an animator I am http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=51896

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    Re: Ok this is my first try soo....

    Oops, at the end of my comment I meant "I liked your attempt at blood", well it's fixed now.
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    Re: Ok this is my first try soo....

    Holy Crap.
    You started EXACTLY like I did.

    We both put to many frames in instead of not enough. Well in my signature is a easing tutorial that helped me on my feet, it should help you aswell. Just get easing and smoothness down and you will be in great shape. Also try not to use stk packs for effects, it's much easier to make your own effects, and it's much more rewarding.

    well good luck man I hope this comment helped you out.

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    Re: Ok this is my first try soo....

    Amber not to be rude but, I didn't use any stk.s, but I guess it's ok to think it has them in it. So what is this considered, like what state in what rank?
    Courtesy You're animation is awsome, mind telling me how good or bad mine is?

    Please give me an idea of how good or bad of an animator I am http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=51896

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    Re: Ok this is my first try soo....

    Quote Originally Posted by pivotcreaterx
    Amber not to be rude but, I didn't use any stk.s, but I guess it's ok to think it has them in it. So what is this considered, like what state in what rank?
    Don't take this hard but i would have to say low beginner. Sorry

    I also realized you need to work on your reactions, like when you guy gets hit by the beam, his body should move where he was hit. But like i said man, keep it up! You WILL get there.

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    Re: Ok this is my first try soo....

    I proabably should have mentioned this earlyier ago but, the beam was supposed to freeze him for about 1 second.
    Courtesy You're animation is awsome, mind telling me how good or bad mine is?

    Please give me an idea of how good or bad of an animator I am http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=51896

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    Re: Ok this is my first try soo....

    For now low beginner but keep trying and I think you’ll get a lot better. Check out bahas tutorial and maybe look at some veteran/elite animations to get some ideas, speed up the framerate and add some more eased frames to your animations, just getting it smooth will make it look a lot better.
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    Re: Ok this is my first try soo....

    My only problem is I don't know how much to move him each frame to make it look like it's happening. In other word's I don't know how much exactly I should move it tool look good.

    E: Well It's been a day, moderator yesterday said I can update whenever I make a new animation.

    SS: Avoid double-posting
    Courtesy You're animation is awsome, mind telling me how good or bad mine is?

    Please give me an idea of how good or bad of an animator I am http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=51896


 
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