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    S. Slaughter's new start.

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    26/12/08 - Hi again, I made a short little skateboarding animation, I wasn't sure if I got the fall at the end right, let me know what you think.

    23/12/08 - Hello everyone, I've decided to attempt to bring animation back into my list of hobbies, I used to animate, got to intermediate! But it's been such a long time since I animated, I feel it would be unfair for me to claim horrific animations I make as "Intermediate" ranked. So I've started again. Back in beginners hall 2.



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    Little Test. - This was my first animation in a long time, I think I did alright.





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    Re: S. Slaughter's new start.

    Pretty good, but too short and a little awkward in places...

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    Re: S. Slaughter's new start.

    Thanks for the comment. S'appreciated.
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    Re: S. Slaughter's new start.

    Holy crap. How are you man! Haven't spoken to you in a while. Glad to see you back.

    The only thing wrong with that animation was it was really stiff. The easing was fine. Keep it up, hope to see you back in intermediate soon.

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    Re: S. Slaughter's new start.

    Jon! I'm good thanks, you?

    Skype: Yeah man I'm good. Get on MSN if you can.

    And thanks for the comment, I'll keep that in mind.
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    Re: S. Slaughter's new start.

    Whoes base is that? :P

    I liked it, it looked kinda like a skip or a triple jump thing lol.. I think you could have eased more at the beginning or sped it up a bit but there are no real problems..
    Make some more stuff to demonstrate your skill, lolz..
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    Re: S. Slaughter's new start.

    Ah, good to see you back.

    I liked the cartoony-ness of the run, though there were a couple of things to improve on.
    The back needs to curve a bit more and react to the feet hitting the ground in the next step, he seems far too static.
    And, the arms were too exaggarated for my liking. Not many people seem to animate this, but when running your arms don't actually go out that much, they mostly staying tucked in and you've made them go up to the stickman's head pretty much.
    One thing I loved in that was how well it was transitioned into the subtle hop just before the transition, it worked so well and looked very smooth, nice one.

    But yeah, that's what I can get from that right now, I can't wait to see what comes next.

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    Re: S. Slaughter's new start.

    Quote Originally Posted by Prescot
    Whoes base is that? :P
    I'm not sure, I just saw "Base Pack" on Droidz and clicked it.
    As for the speeding it up? That's actually always been my style, relatively slow and smooth, but thanks for the comment, courtesy coming your way.

    and Niall! Excellent comment, I'll bear what you said in mind, and edit it a little bit, probably extending it aswell. And, It's nice to be back.

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    Re: S. Slaughter's new start.

    Liked the run, it was nicely eased. The only bad thing is stiffness, I think you should bend back his back a bit during his first steps. And you should think about another fade out to this animation, it may appear confusing to the guy unable to read descriptions.
    However, I think you should be Borderline.

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    Re: S. Slaughter's new start.

    Alright, new one up!
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