My First Animations (p.s and yes im new)

[Lucky2005]

Ok these are 3 of my first animations and i would like u guys to rate it id also

be grateful if u could give me some tips & comments. IM AN UBER NOOOB

tell me really what u think about em dont be scared to say : U SUK NOOOOOOOOOOB )

ok here they are:

http://www.imagecabin.com/?view=915891Z34bC9vXBEC683W7

http://www.imagecabin.com/?view=112417hby3tevB3f380N4j

http://www.imagecabin.com/?view=2228068gB2UTptXd6171rq<--- this one

sux plz gimme fighting tips.

Oh and im not sure if i posted in the right place cuz its was made with pivot and flash wa_)(

EDIT: Oh Shit forgot to give credit MAJOR THX To Liquid Sword 4 the .stk and others that i dun remember the name

Eh, they're piv-based so they can go here.

Well, the realism needs a lot of work, they're pretty jerky. But I DO like your idea of masking over the pivot with flash effects. They need some work (again) but you've got good ideas.

[Lucky2005]

Ok thx for the tip and yes i know my fight animation really blows but i just cant

figure out how to make the movements right i consulted lots of tuts and i dun really

understand wa_)(

P.S Sorry for my bad english

[aje54548]

those are very good concepts using pivot and flash! but is all you need to do i really work on your blood and smoothness. and the smoothness dont put you charecter to far apart each frame and put them a reasonable amount of time to you animations. then you will be a very good animator.

[Lucky2005]

Thx ill remember that what do u meen by smoothness?

[Goolien]

he means you need to try and improve maybe the spacing in your movements and trying to get them flow a bit more....For an example check the movement spacing tut in the pivot tutorials section

[DarkDemonStick]

Ehh, it is little choppy but i am not tell you that you are noob

i really do like your aniamtor stickmen and you have some good blood and your creatives are so good

[Adam]

Like the others are saying, by looking at the first animation you posted it does require some smoothness, using more frames for movements and so forth. Good luck.

[Lucky2005]

Ok so what I have to remember is to make more frames for a movement but when I

put too much frames it goes super slow -crazy-