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    Lorcan's Ship of Adventure!

    Hmm, I've been looking around this site for awhile, and I've come up with some random animations of various things. I don't have them to date...since...I don't date 'em currently!
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    Mini-beam test...crappy!


    Easing tests
    http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r192 ... ngtest.gif
    http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r192 ... t/easq.gif

    Cartoony choke punch o.o
    http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r192 ... dpunch.gif

    Punch Test
    http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r192 ... er-cut.gif

    Tournament/Group fight
    http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r192 ... nament.gif

    Grind Signature


    Basketball!


    Boxman down!
    http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r192 ... adhit1.gif

    Tri-man!
    http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r192 ... figure.gif

    Swordplay!


    Delayed Hit


    Even I don't know...
    http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r192 ... s.Blue.gif

    Fliparoo!


    Talk about knocking yourself out
    http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r192 ... ownGIF.gif

    Mario-spring jump!
    http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r192 ... mpMano.gif

    Finally! It's done for now. Just picked out the ones I liked and looked good.
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    You can call me Lor or Lorcan, whichever you choose!

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    Re: Lorcan's Ship of Adventure!

    The only thing I can say is...


    LOWER YOUR FRAME RATE!!!!!

    and in some raise it.
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    Re: Lorcan's Ship of Adventure!

    Quote Originally Posted by Ko!n
    The only thing I can say is...


    LOWER YOUR FRAME RATE!!!!!

    and in some raise it.
    They're good, but I agree with Ko!n.
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    Re: Lorcan's Ship of Adventure!

    koin said it all, and cut stiffnes, you have 100% stiffnes on your animations.
    i guess...

    Courtezy???
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    Re: Lorcan's Ship of Adventure!

    , As I said, I've never done this quite correctly like everyone else before. Any tips on a right frame rate?

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    Re: Lorcan's Ship of Adventure!

    Quote Originally Posted by Lorcan!
    , As I said, I've never done this quite correctly like everyone else before. Any tips on a right frame rate?

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    Good framerate should be set to 6/100 of a second. Also, if you could maybe put [img] tags around your links, it will turn them into images so we don't have to click on them all to go see them
    Code:
    [img]*link to anim goes here*[/img]
    It should like that.^

    Now a brief criticism session.

    Your beam test was pretty good, but to make it better, you should have made the lines at then end fade into nothing, instead of making them shrink back into the ball. Also: you may want to get rid of the little white thing in the center of the ball also.

    You other animations were pretty good, but they were stiff. You need to move every joint in every frame. This must be done in order to eliminate stiffness.

    That's really all for now. Good job, and keep it up!
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    Re: Lorcan's Ship of Adventure!

    Thank you kindly.I shall put your criticism into effect on later animations! =D

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    Re: Lorcan's Ship of Adventure!

    Quote Originally Posted by Ko!n
    The only thing I can say is...


    LOWER YOUR FRAME RATE!!!!!

    and in some raise it.
    he is right. in some it looked like it was in fast forward and others in slow motions
    the anis are getting gradually smother but it could be improved by looking at bahas tut! it helps ALOT
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    Re: Lorcan's Ship of Adventure!

    You still really have to watch your shakyness and stiffness.
    Try easing more. You have great potential, I see that in your animations.
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